Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL! A fun idea to incorporate this into a Halloween gathering -- a plethora of puns to enjoy!! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;) :)

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020

Thank you, Y.M. Roger, for your kind comments and good luck wishes. I appreciate that you took the time to read my story. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Beck Fenton

Excellent

I can see you had fun with puns. But beware! They can become quite addicting! You did a good job with introducing the new characters and puns that were attached!

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020

Thank you, Beck.fenton, for your kind comments. I appreciate that you took the time to read my story. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Ben B.

Good

I thought it was ok, but dead honest opinion it was full of Halloween themed dad jokes. What your story needs is a single action or interaction amongst your characters that really stands out.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020

Thanks for Ben B for your comments.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Puns are always fun. And with Halloween on the way soon, you'll be ready for all the Fanstory contest that will be coming up soon. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020

Hi Ric Myworld,
Thank you for reading my story and rating it. I appreciate it a lot.