Whenever Pals Must Say Goodbye
a 12 word contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Yes this is such a classic end of Summer moment -friendships formed and goodbyes to be honed - effectively portrayed here in this twelve word poetry contest
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Yes this is such a classic end of Summer moment -friendships formed and goodbyes to be honed - effectively portrayed here in this twelve word poetry contest
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Many thanks, zanya, for sharing my short poem.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Short but quite nice and inspirational. Wordless farewell. The silence speaks volumes as to how the subjects are feeling about summers end. Nice writing.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Short but quite nice and inspirational. Wordless farewell. The silence speaks volumes as to how the subjects are feeling about summers end. Nice writing.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much, Joanne, for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent twelve word poem for the contest
that many experience as summer friendships come to an end.
It is also saying goodbye to the ocean, sand and salty breeze.
Well done.
best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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You've written an excellent twelve word poem for the contest
that many experience as summer friendships come to an end.
It is also saying goodbye to the ocean, sand and salty breeze.
Well done.
best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for sharing my poem and your kind praise, Robert.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and
good presentation.
-I have never liked
goodbyes, either.
-You have used your twelve
words well to capture the
moment when two people
must say farewell after
sharing good times during the summer.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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-Very nice artwork and
good presentation.
-I have never liked
goodbyes, either.
-You have used your twelve
words well to capture the
moment when two people
must say farewell after
sharing good times during the summer.
-Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Pam, for reading and reviewing my short poem. Saying goodbye to friends was always the hardest thing to do when I was a kid.
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You are welcome. I only got to see my grandparents once a year when I was growing up because we lived far away, and it was always painful leaving.
Comment from mrsmajor
A 12 word entry, perfectly matched with the picture..and so true, you wrote a good entry for the contest, and I wish you good luck...Thanks for sharing.
Warmly,
Victoria
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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A 12 word entry, perfectly matched with the picture..and so true, you wrote a good entry for the contest, and I wish you good luck...Thanks for sharing.
Warmly,
Victoria
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Many thanks for reading and reviewing my short poem, Victoria.
You're quite welcome, it was my pleasure!
Victoria
