In The Ripening
Enjoying sweetness with maturity12 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is well-presented. I like the alliteration of b & s. Your 12 words, as required, speak to many. In younger years it is easy to have a attitude. But with maturity, those do change.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your contest entry is well-presented. I like the alliteration of b & s. Your 12 words, as required, speak to many. In younger years it is easy to have a attitude. But with maturity, those do change.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for the twelve word contest
about the wisdom, and solace that comes from experience and perspective.
Nice use of alliteration and sound and interesting art work to match.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
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You've written an excellent poem for the twelve word contest
about the wisdom, and solace that comes from experience and perspective.
Nice use of alliteration and sound and interesting art work to match.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
