Fun-tastic
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This sounds good, Iza, I saw your latest part and decided to look for the first chapter. We won't know for a while whether we are immortal or not, too soon after having my first vaccine and still waiting for the second jab. I like your thinking, and will look for the next part. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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This sounds good, Iza, I saw your latest part and decided to look for the first chapter. We won't know for a while whether we are immortal or not, too soon after having my first vaccine and still waiting for the second jab. I like your thinking, and will look for the next part. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-Mar-2021
Comment from LisaMay
New day, old day, same day! - how awful if everything were perfect. it's life's dramas, unexpected challenges and difficulties to be overcome, chance encounters for good or bad, that make life worth living.
A life without icecream would be terrible - no wonder there was a resistance movement. Mmmmm.... berry nice icecream!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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New day, old day, same day! - how awful if everything were perfect. it's life's dramas, unexpected challenges and difficulties to be overcome, chance encounters for good or bad, that make life worth living.
A life without icecream would be terrible - no wonder there was a resistance movement. Mmmmm.... berry nice icecream!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Yup, I am on keto so it's terrible without icecream:( Thanks for reading:)
Comment from Loren .
This is a thought provoking read, indeed. It could almost go under the heading of philosophical as well. And, probably, most frightening about the premise of the story is that it is something mankind seems to be striving for and seems (in vain, in my opinion) within his reach. One does begin to wonder where sci-fi fantasy ends and reality begins. Loren
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This is a thought provoking read, indeed. It could almost go under the heading of philosophical as well. And, probably, most frightening about the premise of the story is that it is something mankind seems to be striving for and seems (in vain, in my opinion) within his reach. One does begin to wonder where sci-fi fantasy ends and reality begins. Loren
Comment Written 13-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from lightink
This is such an awesome story of a negative?positive?....utopia!
I sooooo wish a whole book came out of this! I want to know what happens next. If you decide to continue this, please let me know.
Such thought provoking...a world in which you can't even commit suicide...
There is something genius about the ice-cream code word to look for those who remember. But who cares about berry flavor? Chocolate!!! ;)
Thank you for the most fascinating piece of sci-fi!
Warmly,
J
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This is such an awesome story of a negative?positive?....utopia!
I sooooo wish a whole book came out of this! I want to know what happens next. If you decide to continue this, please let me know.
Such thought provoking...a world in which you can't even commit suicide...
There is something genius about the ice-cream code word to look for those who remember. But who cares about berry flavor? Chocolate!!! ;)
Thank you for the most fascinating piece of sci-fi!
Warmly,
J
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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That is a good idea, maybe I should try to continue this story in a book:)
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Yes, you could make it a whole novel! I'd love that! Do you have the capacity right now to start a bigger project like that?
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I will try:)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear 'Mystery' writer,
If only. No matter what the future holds, I'm hoping there will always be some people who choose to rebel - even if only a wee bit -- and eat ice cream. haha
This was a fun entry. Good luck!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Dear 'Mystery' writer,
If only. No matter what the future holds, I'm hoping there will always be some people who choose to rebel - even if only a wee bit -- and eat ice cream. haha
This was a fun entry. Good luck!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Bill Schott
This futuristic story, Fun-tastic, has an inverted plot line where the 'perfection' of the future is challenged, and the imperfection and uncertainty of living is the new dream. Cool.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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This futuristic story, Fun-tastic, has an inverted plot line where the 'perfection' of the future is challenged, and the imperfection and uncertainty of living is the new dream. Cool.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Alchera
Well written and projected but the photo is horrible I can't look at it! I prefer our i perfect world to your perfect world Iza because I wouldn't bear laziness all day long! But Who knows what will happen to us ? At the end I laugh about think of it . Great idea!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Well written and projected but the photo is horrible I can't look at it! I prefer our i perfect world to your perfect world Iza because I wouldn't bear laziness all day long! But Who knows what will happen to us ? At the end I laugh about think of it . Great idea!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you:) for taking a chance on this story.
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Blessings! Tony
Comment from lyenochka
You wrote a very imaginative and engaging story!! You created a problem based on not having problems and though everything is perfect and everyone is immortal, there is a need for a "resistance!" Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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You wrote a very imaginative and engaging story!! You created a problem based on not having problems and though everything is perfect and everyone is immortal, there is a need for a "resistance!" Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from amada
The future, oh the future...I like this line because it carries lots of truth, and fear. "Life in plastic, is fantastic..." Your lines reflect a good imagination. Great sense of unreality.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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The future, oh the future...I like this line because it carries lots of truth, and fear. "Life in plastic, is fantastic..." Your lines reflect a good imagination. Great sense of unreality.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much Ms. Amanda:)
Comment from zanya
Yes indeed- who knows where we will eventually end up on this planet as everything shifts and the earth seems to be moving under our feet - that last line holds promise !!!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Yes indeed- who knows where we will eventually end up on this planet as everything shifts and the earth seems to be moving under our feet - that last line holds promise !!!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much:)
