Life is a gift
Don't waste it..7 total reviews
Comment from Rashanna Popoola
I like the way the writer presented this poem.Even Though your having some challenges, you think of your daughters which they help you to get through hard days.That's so wonderful to read about.Thank You for sharing and stay strong!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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I like the way the writer presented this poem.Even Though your having some challenges, you think of your daughters which they help you to get through hard days.That's so wonderful to read about.Thank You for sharing and stay strong!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much. My amazing three daughters keep me going. Thanks so much for reading. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about overcoming adversities. When we can accept our fate in life and work around the things we are restricted to do, we can have a full and happy life that's different from any other normal life.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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A very well-written poem about overcoming adversities. When we can accept our fate in life and work around the things we are restricted to do, we can have a full and happy life that's different from any other normal life.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thank so much for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from equestrik
Well done! This is a really good write about overcoming adversity. Chronic pain is really difficult to deal with every day. I hope you are able to get some relief. I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Well done! This is a really good write about overcoming adversity. Chronic pain is really difficult to deal with every day. I hope you are able to get some relief. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading and for your kind words. I'm lucky to have a very supportive family who helps me every step of the way.
Comment from Mimi Linny
A wonderful and inspiring piece of poetry on "Overcoming Adversity." Your rhyming is spot on and rhythm well done. A couple of tiny suggestions:
1. I think (just my opinion) that your 3rd verse, 1st line, needs an additional syllable for better flow - suggest: "My heart though failing..."
2. I think (again, just my opinion) that your 4th verse, 3rd line, has one too many syllables for natural flow - suggest changing "sodium" to "salty"
Love this piece and hope you don't mind the above suggestions for perfect rhythm. Wishing you great luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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A wonderful and inspiring piece of poetry on "Overcoming Adversity." Your rhyming is spot on and rhythm well done. A couple of tiny suggestions:
1. I think (just my opinion) that your 3rd verse, 1st line, needs an additional syllable for better flow - suggest: "My heart though failing..."
2. I think (again, just my opinion) that your 4th verse, 3rd line, has one too many syllables for natural flow - suggest changing "sodium" to "salty"
Love this piece and hope you don't mind the above suggestions for perfect rhythm. Wishing you great luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this nice review and your excellent suggestions. It's much appreciated.
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a very beautiful poem. It's very honest and filled with emotion. It's a beautiful thing to be able to express ones feelings as you have here. You're right. Life is a gift. Don't waste it
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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This is a very beautiful poem. It's very honest and filled with emotion. It's a beautiful thing to be able to express ones feelings as you have here. You're right. Life is a gift. Don't waste it
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you for this nice review.
Comment from mermaids
This is such an uplifting poem, moving forward and thinking positive despite the pain of arthritis. You have a smooth poetic form that adds to the strength of your theme and others who have arthritis need to read your words.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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This is such an uplifting poem, moving forward and thinking positive despite the pain of arthritis. You have a smooth poetic form that adds to the strength of your theme and others who have arthritis need to read your words.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you, that's very nice of you to say. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Demonstrates Nice writing and rhymes quite well. Certainly depicts adversity. It seems nothing holds you back. Seems determined. This is very well written.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Demonstrates Nice writing and rhymes quite well. Certainly depicts adversity. It seems nothing holds you back. Seems determined. This is very well written.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for this great review and taking time to read my poem.
