My Talking Parrot
5/7/5 for site contest about a loved animal.12 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet ..
I gave you your 7 th vote.. Glad to see you re leading ..
I loved all entries but yours was sweeter than the rest ..
I love the poem and the rhyme
...and the photo of you two together won my heart and vote.
....the loving bond between you and Bert is evident.
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Ciao mystery poet ..
I gave you your 7 th vote.. Glad to see you re leading ..
I loved all entries but yours was sweeter than the rest ..
I love the poem and the rhyme
...and the photo of you two together won my heart and vote.
....the loving bond between you and Bert is evident.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 5-7-5 Pet Poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. I like the parrot theme. Good luck!
Gypsy
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 5-7-5 Pet Poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. I like the parrot theme. Good luck!
Gypsy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 about pets, My Talking Parrot, has the right set up and alerts the reader to Burt's blurts and what words might seem curt and hurt.
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This 5-7-5 about pets, My Talking Parrot, has the right set up and alerts the reader to Burt's blurts and what words might seem curt and hurt.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
Comment from damommy
How sweet! I can see he's very personable. Is this a picture of you both?
I used to have a parakeet that talk very well. Good luck in the contest.
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How sweet! I can see he's very personable. Is this a picture of you both?
I used to have a parakeet that talk very well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This poem is a great entry for the 5-7-5 Pet Poetry writing prompt. There is truth in a few words. Best of luck in the contest!
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This poem is a great entry for the 5-7-5 Pet Poetry writing prompt. There is truth in a few words. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
Comment from equestrik
Burt is quite handsome! I have the feeling that most parrots are extroverts. At least the ones I have met. I love the picture which definitely portrays the relationship between human and beloved pet.
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Burt is quite handsome! I have the feeling that most parrots are extroverts. At least the ones I have met. I love the picture which definitely portrays the relationship between human and beloved pet.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Readers can feel the love you have for Burt. He, like all other parrots, is a smart bird that humans don't always give credit for what he can do. I enjoyed your contest entry--the picture's great, the rhymes are an added bonus, and the message gave me a laugh.
Best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Readers can feel the love you have for Burt. He, like all other parrots, is a smart bird that humans don't always give credit for what he can do. I enjoyed your contest entry--the picture's great, the rhymes are an added bonus, and the message gave me a laugh.
Best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Burt makes people chuckle all the time, when they're not blocking their ears and blushing.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 pet poem about the parrot embarrassing his owner with swear words loud and clear for everyone around to hear the rudeness he blurts out.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 pet poem about the parrot embarrassing his owner with swear words loud and clear for everyone around to hear the rudeness he blurts out.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Yes, he's a naughty bird!
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is hilarious. Love your parrot Bert, the extrovert (smile). A great entry in the contest, with a stunning artistic presentation, good visuals, and lots of humor and it.
I wish you luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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This is hilarious. Love your parrot Bert, the extrovert (smile). A great entry in the contest, with a stunning artistic presentation, good visuals, and lots of humor and it.
I wish you luck in the booths.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Burt is a naughty bird. Parrots are very clever - he probably enjoys being a potty mouth because people react.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, I loved these words here and Burt knows how to get everyone's attention and I would love to hear him! Ha ha ha, this is a fun write and sure to be a WINNER for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Ha ha ha, I loved these words here and Burt knows how to get everyone's attention and I would love to hear him! Ha ha ha, this is a fun write and sure to be a WINNER for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Burt is a naughty bird. Parrots are very clever - he probably enjoys being a potty mouth because people react.