Past Due
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Comment from WriterHeather
Haha Haha! I guess you wouldn't need penicillin with bread that moldy! It doesn't look very appetizing though. Great job on this one. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Haha Haha! I guess you wouldn't need penicillin with bread that moldy! It doesn't look very appetizing though. Great job on this one. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you. This is a great review. :)
Comment from lancellot
Oh, yes I think you got one the is universally disgusting. And you pick a perfect picture as an example. Your poem is spot on in construction.
Yeah, this is just what the contest called for.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Oh, yes I think you got one the is universally disgusting. And you pick a perfect picture as an example. Your poem is spot on in construction.
Yeah, this is just what the contest called for.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reading. There were so many disgusting things to chose from, it was hard to decide...lol.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Never heard about this genre before, so I guess the idea is to create a shocking story with less words. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Never heard about this genre before, so I guess the idea is to create a shocking story with less words. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you for reviewing. I've never wrote one of this type of poetry before, so I'll see what happens. Thanks again. :)
