A Little Likening to 'Ell
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Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an interesting entry for the Alliteration writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I send you the best of good luck!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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This is an interesting entry for the Alliteration writing prompt. It should do well in the contest. I send you the best of good luck!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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LOL!! Thanx for stopping in on this nutty one, Rebecca - take care! ;) Yvette
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You're quite welcome.
Comment from Mia Twysted
It was a tougue twister will all those L's, but I think that is the point. I hear a story in their, but I am not sure what it is telling me. I see a boat on water and I can't figure out the rest. This was interesting.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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It was a tougue twister will all those L's, but I think that is the point. I hear a story in their, but I am not sure what it is telling me. I see a boat on water and I can't figure out the rest. This was interesting.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from RShipp
Wow. You went all out on the 'l' sounds. Well done.
I enjoyed trying to decide what what eacch of your lines meant.
Best of luck in the Alliteration poem writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Wow. You went all out on the 'l' sounds. Well done.
I enjoyed trying to decide what what eacch of your lines meant.
Best of luck in the Alliteration poem writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Boogienights
That is a lot of L words used very creativity. It's not an easy thing to do, i did one once using the letter C. It took me forever. A great contest entry, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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That is a lot of L words used very creativity. It's not an easy thing to do, i did one once using the letter C. It took me forever. A great contest entry, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much, Boogienights!!
Comment from w.j.debi
Wow, what a lot of "L's". I am impressed with how well you handled this challenge. Not only have you used the consonant in a great alliterative manner, but your poem even makes sense and has lots of great imagery.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Wow, what a lot of "L's". I am impressed with how well you handled this challenge. Not only have you used the consonant in a great alliterative manner, but your poem even makes sense and has lots of great imagery.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Lots-n-lots of L's, yeah?! ;) Thanks so much, W.J.!!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Little Likening to 'Ell
Hello anonymous
Nice entry for the Alliteration poem writing prompt contest. Good use of the letter L. I think it must be hard to write complete sentences in complete alliteration. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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A Little Likening to 'Ell
Hello anonymous
Nice entry for the Alliteration poem writing prompt contest. Good use of the letter L. I think it must be hard to write complete sentences in complete alliteration. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Lots-n-lots of L's, yeah?! ;) Thanks so much, Gypsy!!
Comment from Valerie Fish
I'm afraid I couldn't see the message in there, to me this was too contrived and didn't make sense. Perhaps you were trying too hard, a shorter piece might have had more effect.
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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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I'm afraid I couldn't see the message in there, to me this was too contrived and didn't make sense. Perhaps you were trying too hard, a shorter piece might have had more effect.
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Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Wow, I didn't know there were that many "L" words in the dictionary! I like your poem and you were able to meet the requirements of the contest very poetically.
Good luck!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Wow, I didn't know there were that many "L" words in the dictionary! I like your poem and you were able to meet the requirements of the contest very poetically.
Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Lots-n-lots of L's, yeah?! ;) Thanks so much, Susan!!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Holy smokes, that's a lot of "l" -- you didn't miss a word -- but then, I just read the contest instructions. Yowza! And wow, that killer last line. --I love it. I think I might have read the winner again -- best of luck in the booth! (Incredible artwork you chose too!)
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Holy smokes, that's a lot of "l" -- you didn't miss a word -- but then, I just read the contest instructions. Yowza! And wow, that killer last line. --I love it. I think I might have read the winner again -- best of luck in the booth! (Incredible artwork you chose too!)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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LOL!! (and there's another!)... Thanx so much, Dawn -- always good to here from you down here! ;)
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:) You're very welcome.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent alliteration entry in this contest, the wonderful thing is it makes sense, which really should be the criteria. And I think this is a magnificent entry, and best of all, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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This is an excellent alliteration entry in this contest, the wonderful thing is it makes sense, which really should be the criteria. And I think this is a magnificent entry, and best of all, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanks so very much, Roy!
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Thank you
