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Viewing comments for Chapter 216 "The Surf."
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Comment from Cindy Decker
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I saw Jaws, Rhonnie.
It was pretty scary. But that was only one shark.
Your photo and poem fit the 'horror' type of poem.
I can't imagine how i would feel seeing all these sharks a once!
Good luck in all your contests and all of your writing, Rhonnie.
Have a wonderful week.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2020

Comment from mermaids
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Your words fit perfectly with the picture. It is true, sometimes fish are spotted in the surf and we have to be careful, especially if sharks are swimming.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    HELLO MERMAIDS: I thank you for your encouraging review. You are greatly appreciated. Stay safe. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Mia Twysted
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I am sure this poem would make more sense to a suffer. Me, I hear that the writer is "leery" about doing something he he noraly loves to do. If it is of any interest to you. As I read this piece 'Zombie' by Bad Wolves was playing.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    HELLO MIA TWISTED: I thank you for your review. You understand me here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.