Comment from Rashanna Popoola

Excellent

I thought that the way the poem begin ed was on point and the ending was challenging for both the sheep and the writer I would suggest that a more comfortable word to be used like soothe at the end

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020

Soothe won't work. Must be an sh sound at the beginning. But thanks for the read, review and the suggestion.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

I love this as a farm girl. I never showed sheep but have sure bathed a lot of horses for shows. It looks as if the girl is quite happy, he sheep, not so much.:)

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020

Thanks for the read and the review. Bet you got bathed too when you washed the horses.

reply by equestrik on 08-Sep-2020

Absolutely!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

The picture is as cute as the poem. I thought you did a great job with this alliteration. The words are perfect for the content. Very fun and enjoyable read!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020

Thanks so much for the read and the review. So pleased you enjoyed the effort.