Comment from Cindy Decker

Excellent

Hi, Carolyn.
We are the same age!
I love your circular poem; it is very creative. Writing this type of poem is extremely difficult, using only a handful of words. Lovely work. Nice photo.
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020

Thank you so much for your review.

Comment from RShipp

Excellent

I liked how your second line connected so smoothly to the last.

The picture you selected was a good choice.

Best of luck in the 1-7-1 writing prompt contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020

Thank you for your review.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the 1-7-1 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. Nice presentation. Waves is a good subject.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020

Thanks.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-7-1 poem, Peace, has the right set up and allows the reader to imagine the gentle and steady tidal laps which reach into the psyche and wash one's fears away.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020

Thank you for your inspiring review.