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a 1-7-18 total reviews
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a fine thought for the 1-7-1entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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This is a fine thought for the 1-7-1entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thanks, TT
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This poem made me smile the first time I read it, and laugh out loud the second time. I encourage such feel-good factor wholeheartedly in the current trying circumstances.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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This poem made me smile the first time I read it, and laugh out loud the second time. I encourage such feel-good factor wholeheartedly in the current trying circumstances.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Katherine
Comment from Mia Twysted
I don't understand this piece. You write, "I think this poem is Ia." Is the "a" supposed to be there? That would make more sense to me saying "I think this poem is I."
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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I don't understand this piece. You write, "I think this poem is Ia." Is the "a" supposed to be there? That would make more sense to me saying "I think this poem is I."
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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LAME
Comment from Tina Crute
I am not sure I get the "la" part, but I get the gist of the meaning of the poem as a whole. We can be self-centered and make things all about us, and sometimes that's okay. Other times, well it is a habit that needs to be broken. Because this poem is short, it leaves much to the imagination of the reader, so I may not have gotten your meaning, b ut still it makes me think...and that's a good thing!
Tina
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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I am not sure I get the "la" part, but I get the gist of the meaning of the poem as a whole. We can be self-centered and make things all about us, and sometimes that's okay. Other times, well it is a habit that needs to be broken. Because this poem is short, it leaves much to the imagination of the reader, so I may not have gotten your meaning, b ut still it makes me think...and that's a good thing!
Tina
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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I was feeling cute. This poem is LAME
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Haha...I dont know what to think now.
Comment from roof35
I don't find your poem lame. This is only so much you can say in so few words and you have said it very nicely. Your illustration, of course, pairs well.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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I don't find your poem lame. This is only so much you can say in so few words and you have said it very nicely. Your illustration, of course, pairs well.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thank you, roof, for the kind review.
Comment from RShipp
A clever way to end your 1-7--1 poem.... Very clever.
The picture you selected was a good choice.
Best of luck in the 1-7-1 writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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A clever way to end your 1-7--1 poem.... Very clever.
The picture you selected was a good choice.
Best of luck in the 1-7-1 writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thank you, RS
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Okay entry for the 1-7-1 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. Nice presentation.
The poem is kind of funny.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Okay entry for the 1-7-1 writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. Nice presentation.
The poem is kind of funny.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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Thank you, GBR
Comment from equestrik
I like your photo and get the gist but I do not know what the 'la' means. I think not knowing that takes away from my enjoyment of the poem.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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I like your photo and get the gist but I do not know what the 'la' means. I think not knowing that takes away from my enjoyment of the poem.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
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I had it in notes, but took it out. The last word is LAME. Funny, huh?
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:)