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Never Blurred

1-7-1 contest entry

9 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 1-7-1 poem about the truth that are not blurred but always clear and honest with no covering up to hide the truth.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Truth always prevails in the end and it may take centuries for it to appear but truth has the tenacity to stay with us and not be blurred, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
    So glad this piece resonated with you!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a fine thought for the 1-7-1entry. Sometime short thoughts can really hit the spot, touch our heart, and even be encouraging. Well done!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
    So glad this short piece resonated with you! Thank you for the positive feedback.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 1-7-1 poem, Never Blurred, has the right set up and points out to the reader that real truth needs no explanation or pondering. It looks like a duck.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
    If it walks like a duck, it?s a duck...thanks for sharing your insightful comments!
Comment from Mia Twysted
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I hear what you are saying. You cannot fade the lines of what is true and unchangeable. You simply decide what you will choose to believe. That is the message I am taking away from this piece.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
    Sooner or later, the truth comes out. Thanks for sharing your insights,
Comment from zanya
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Yes Truth is getting a tough time these days - buffeted and blown in all directions -difficult to extricate truth from half truth and lies at times - interesting visual

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
    Thank you! The eye in the artwork reminded me of Sherlock Holmes and his spy glass examining evidence. Lol
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a good job with this contest prompt, Mystery Writer. Your words flow well and make sense when repeating the first word as the last line. I like your image choice and your message is clear.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much!
Comment from mermaids
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Excellent 1-7-1 form and use of words. Your poem has meaning and the words "never blurred" are powerful and add to the strength of your theme. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very good artwork.
-A good topic and
formatting of your poem.
-The message about
truth is a very good one.
-I can never be blurred
or stretched, for then is
isn't the truth.
-A good entry; good luck.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much!
reply by Pam (respa) on 08-Sep-2020
    You are welcome.