Autumn Wind
Fall wind doing its job.4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This nature 5-7-5, Autumn Wind, has the right set up and puts the wind in the position of the aggressor, as the struggling trees are stripped of what they have left.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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This nature 5-7-5, Autumn Wind, has the right set up and puts the wind in the position of the aggressor, as the struggling trees are stripped of what they have left.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
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Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The wind is also knocking all those not-yet-fallen acorns down. Sone people talk of hailstone dents in their car. I have acorn dents. There is no place to park that doesn't have acorn trees up above. I also had the coolest experience. I wqs pulling up weeds and I began pulling up the tens of oak sprigs. I grabbed four in my hand. I was the funniest experience. I pulled up the handful of oaks saplings and at the bottom of each was a complete acorn. I don't think I've ever seen that before.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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The wind is also knocking all those not-yet-fallen acorns down. Sone people talk of hailstone dents in their car. I have acorn dents. There is no place to park that doesn't have acorn trees up above. I also had the coolest experience. I wqs pulling up weeds and I began pulling up the tens of oak sprigs. I grabbed four in my hand. I was the funniest experience. I pulled up the handful of oaks saplings and at the bottom of each was a complete acorn. I don't think I've ever seen that before.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Neither have I. Something to consider writing about. Thanks for your read and review. So, I guess it's true, "From little acorns big oak trees grow."
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LOL
Comment from LisaMay
Nude branches are definitely a sign of winter approaching... nice use of 'leaving'. The oak tree will be feeling the chill of that gusty autumn wind. I like your colour scheme and illustration also.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Nude branches are definitely a sign of winter approaching... nice use of 'leaving'. The oak tree will be feeling the chill of that gusty autumn wind. I like your colour scheme and illustration also.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your read and review. Pleased that the illustration had part in your review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Nature 5/7/5 poem tells a romantic story about autumn that gusts of autumn winds stripped your oak tree's branches and left it naked; I like and have enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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This Nature 5/7/5 poem tells a romantic story about autumn that gusts of autumn winds stripped your oak tree's branches and left it naked; I like and have enjoyed the read; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read, review and comment.
