Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 7/7 poem for the multi-author Renga book about the Ellie cat sleeping peacefully with only her chest rises and falls as the only movement.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020

Thank you

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Watching our pets sleeping makes us feel like caring protectors as we see their innocence on display, I felt those emotions when reading your words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020

Thank you very much, Dolly

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your cat, Ellie with us. She really looks sound asleep. Your couplet follows the previous 5-7-5 haiku in the Renga book well. Big smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2020

Thank you very much for your review and kind words about Ellie. She is a really good cat with lots of patience with my grandson.

Hugs,

Gypsy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I like how you added your renga after the previous one that mentioned 'purring.' Your picture is adorable. I like the color scheme which sets off the cute kitty against the black background. Your words are descriptive. I could see Ellie as she slept.

Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020

Thank you very much for your review and kind words.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

I love the clarity of this couplet for the renga book. Cats do have a way of making all things seem serene ... at times. lol

Excellent work and a pleasure to read and review today. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020

Thank you very much, Gloria. It's always good to hear from you.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Don't they just? They seem to sleep through when things a good, but they can be bolt upright when perceived danger threatens, a beautifully written 7/7 Gypsy, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020

Thank you very much, Roy. It's always good to hear from you.

reply by royowen on 05-Sep-2020

Welcome Gypsy

Comment from lightink

Excellent

I like how you shifted the previous image towards an actual CAT.
Lovely description! Also, congratulations for placing second in the haiku contest! Well deserved!

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020

Thank you very much, Jyoti. It's always good to hear from you. Thank you very much for your encouraging congratulations...my friend.

Hugs,

Gypsy

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This is an excellent follow-up poem for the Renga. The illustration, of course pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words. This is nicely done.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020

Thank you very much. It's always good to hear from you.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Aww. That's so cute. Animals and babies are so delightful to observe sleeping. And when they dream - it's even more fun to imagine what they are acting out in their dreams.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020

Thank you, Helen, you are the best. Happy long weekend.

Hugs,

Gypsy