Evening
And all that it encompasses...29 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-You wrote a very
good poem about it.
-Effective imagery and rhyme,
as well as personification.
-That is a lot to achieve
in a few short words.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-You wrote a very
good poem about it.
-Effective imagery and rhyme,
as well as personification.
-That is a lot to achieve
in a few short words.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Patty Palmer
That's how it goes. First dusk sweeps in and it's sunset on it's way. Twighlight lingers for a bit, then, night finally falls all around. Peaceful! Nice job! I love the artwork that accompanied this poem. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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That's how it goes. First dusk sweeps in and it's sunset on it's way. Twighlight lingers for a bit, then, night finally falls all around. Peaceful! Nice job! I love the artwork that accompanied this poem. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Lantern poem describes a state of moments in an evening when we find the dusk creeps in and twilight calls night; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This Lantern poem describes a state of moments in an evening when we find the dusk creeps in and twilight calls night; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked the creeping night as it slowly darkens the scene until night takes hold and dusk slowly dims the light, a fine lantern going out, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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I liked the creeping night as it slowly darkens the scene until night takes hold and dusk slowly dims the light, a fine lantern going out, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Elegant! Dusk creeps, twilight calls, night falls--simple and effective. Good luck in the contest--interesting form--indeed has lantern shape! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Elegant! Dusk creeps, twilight calls, night falls--simple and effective. Good luck in the contest--interesting form--indeed has lantern shape! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lantern poem is excellent; you have made great use of your syllables.
Your description of the gradual coming of night is lovely and appealing.
Good use of personification
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Your lantern poem is excellent; you have made great use of your syllables.
Your description of the gradual coming of night is lovely and appealing.
Good use of personification
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mystery Author,
This is a fine entry for the Lantern poetry contest. It works, a lantern in the dark, like those in your picture. You describe nightfall very well, and your 5-line syllabic pattern is correct. And you've included a rhyme as well.
Nicely penned!
I wish you luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Hi Mystery Author,
This is a fine entry for the Lantern poetry contest. It works, a lantern in the dark, like those in your picture. You describe nightfall very well, and your 5-line syllabic pattern is correct. And you've included a rhyme as well.
Nicely penned!
I wish you luck in the contest!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, Kimbob!!
Comment from Adam Graham
Between the selection of the words, the mood of the piece and the carefully selected visual presentation, this piece provided a nice atmosphere to relax into as I wait for nightfall myself. Great piece!
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Between the selection of the words, the mood of the piece and the carefully selected visual presentation, this piece provided a nice atmosphere to relax into as I wait for nightfall myself. Great piece!
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from lancellot
Very nice. Simple, natural and timeless. It has more than one possible meaning that depends on the reader and their level of wisdom. You did well the requirements too. It reads like a winner to me.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Very nice. Simple, natural and timeless. It has more than one possible meaning that depends on the reader and their level of wisdom. You did well the requirements too. It reads like a winner to me.
Well done.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much!!
