Evening
And all that it encompasses...29 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
I like the assonance of the long "i" and short "a" sounds. Those sounds fit so well in the song of the night and the calls made by the various creatures within it. It's no wonder you won. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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I like the assonance of the long "i" and short "a" sounds. Those sounds fit so well in the song of the night and the calls made by the various creatures within it. It's no wonder you won. Congratulations.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, W.J. Gotta admit, I'm looking forward to finding some semblance of a 'normal routine' so that I can do more than the 'short contests'! ;) Take care up there and have a great Thursday! ;) Yvette
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I hope you do soon. I am longing to hear more of your two fantasy tales.
Comment from mrsmajor
Perfect example of the form, with words and picture that are well matched...Congratulations on the Win...well deserved!
Thanks also for sharing this with us....This is a 6 star poem...
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Perfect example of the form, with words and picture that are well matched...Congratulations on the Win...well deserved!
Thanks also for sharing this with us....This is a 6 star poem...
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 08-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Wow, Victoria! You've certainly put some brightness in the morning here: THANK YOU very much for those shining stars, my lady!! ;) So glad you enjoyed this one... looking forward to finding some semblance of a 'normal routine' so that I can do more than the 'short contests'! ;) You be sure to take care over in your corner of the universe and have a great remainder of the week! ;) Yvette
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You're very welcome,Yvette, this poem was certainly deserving of the 6 stars, Take Care!
Comment from Boogienights
Wow! This is beautiful poem, with a stunning picture. It's no wonder you won, congratulations. I really love this, thank you for sharing this. I'm glad I didn't enter now, I would have been trounced...lol.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Wow! This is beautiful poem, with a stunning picture. It's no wonder you won, congratulations. I really love this, thank you for sharing this. I'm glad I didn't enter now, I would have been trounced...lol.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Wow!! Thanx so much for this awesome review, Boogie -- and my apologies for running late on my replies. :) Those stars are a wonderful boost in trying to get back into a routine around here... you (and Penny and Robert!) rock!! :) ;) Take care of you out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from equestrik
The writing prompt in itself is quite a challenge. I love the peaceful feel of this write. I think it is an excellent entry for the contest, good luck.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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The writing prompt in itself is quite a challenge. I love the peaceful feel of this write. I think it is an excellent entry for the contest, good luck.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Again, thanx so much for stopping by, my lady -- always good to hear from you! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ah, a perfect lantern, and so evocative -- no surprise it's a winner! Congratulations on a well-earned win, Yvette. When I can place myself in the scene, that's about as good as it gets. :)
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Ah, a perfect lantern, and so evocative -- no surprise it's a winner! Congratulations on a well-earned win, Yvette. When I can place myself in the scene, that's about as good as it gets. :)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for this one, my friend... up until now, I've really only found the time to keep my pen wet on the shorties... but I'm determined to make time for more soon!! ;) :) I need a bit of 'mundane' if that's even possible - ugh!! ;) Take care, you! ;) Yvette
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Ugh. Me too. Not a problem for the actual writing, mind you -- it's the time wasted, waiting between windows here... *sigh!*
Comment from Loren .
Perfect in so many ways. It was easy to sense the imagery of the poem, soft and subtle like coming dusk, billowing only softly only to close again as night gradually falls to close the day. Loren
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Perfect in so many ways. It was easy to sense the imagery of the poem, soft and subtle like coming dusk, billowing only softly only to close again as night gradually falls to close the day. Loren
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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LOL!! So glad you enjoyed this little gem.... up until now, I've really only found the time to keep my pen wet on the shorties... but I'm determined to make time for more soon!! ;) :) Thanx so much for your wonderful review and continued support, sir -- and my apologies for running late on my replies. :) Those stars are a bright spot in my efforts to find a 'new normal' this school year -- thank you!! ;) Take care of you (and Cora and the gang!) out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lantern poem about dusk comes quickly and before we know it is dark outside and we need some light to see where we go when night finally falls.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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A very well-written Lantern poem about dusk comes quickly and before we know it is dark outside and we need some light to see where we go when night finally falls.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
A beautiful poem that fits the poetic structure perfectly. I particularly like the personification of dusk and how it comes "creeping in." The poem flows and is even attractive to look at!
Well done!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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A beautiful poem that fits the poetic structure perfectly. I particularly like the personification of dusk and how it comes "creeping in." The poem flows and is even attractive to look at!
Well done!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much!@
Comment from Chelle_GH
Perfect image and direct words to describe it. Evening, made me want to rest and reflect what I have done for the day. Looking forward for another new day and rest again after. Good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Perfect image and direct words to describe it. Evening, made me want to rest and reflect what I have done for the day. Looking forward for another new day and rest again after. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much !
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Evening", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. It was a pleasure to both read and review, this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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"Evening", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. It was a pleasure to both read and review, this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much !