Ballet
Change of season.2 total reviews
Comment from TommyWrites
So simple, yet so beautifully crafted. I love how writer's can take a few words, and create an image in their reader's minds. I could perfectly see a golden leaf falling down, as the world around it turns into the colors of Autumn. This poem makes me long for Fall all the more. Very beautiful poem, good luck in the contest!
TommyWrites~
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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So simple, yet so beautifully crafted. I love how writer's can take a few words, and create an image in their reader's minds. I could perfectly see a golden leaf falling down, as the world around it turns into the colors of Autumn. This poem makes me long for Fall all the more. Very beautiful poem, good luck in the contest!
TommyWrites~
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is filled with vivid images, Mystery Writer. The image is beautiful and a great pairing with your few syllables. Good job with the syllable count.
Best wishes.
Thank for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Your contest entry is filled with vivid images, Mystery Writer. The image is beautiful and a great pairing with your few syllables. Good job with the syllable count.
Best wishes.
Thank for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review.