The Missing Parcels
It pays to keep track of Post Office deliveries.11 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Well, I love the end rhymes of packing, stacking, lacking, tracking. It does a good job with a rhythm, read silently or aloud. I see you got a photo that definitely fits the poem. This poem also reminds me of a bad experience where I decided I won't ship anything worth over about $30 ever again through the post office. Fun meter.
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Well, I love the end rhymes of packing, stacking, lacking, tracking. It does a good job with a rhythm, read silently or aloud. I see you got a photo that definitely fits the poem. This poem also reminds me of a bad experience where I decided I won't ship anything worth over about $30 ever again through the post office. Fun meter.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Thanks for your review. I just don't trust our post office any more with valuables either... only as tracked courier packet.
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Wow. Maybe you found out the same thing I did back in 2012 with shenanigans in the Atlanta, Georgia recovery center.
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There are too many dishonest people in the world... in any country.
