What Breaks My Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Tears"Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.
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Comment from Tina Crute
This poem is stunning in its simplicity. It is a simple sentence with a profound emotion, illustrated by an amazing picture. Nice job on the poem's format fitting the requirerments. Good luck in the contest!
Tina
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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This poem is stunning in its simplicity. It is a simple sentence with a profound emotion, illustrated by an amazing picture. Nice job on the poem's format fitting the requirerments. Good luck in the contest!
Tina
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you. I really appreciate the comments and the rating. Also, the good luck wish.
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You are very welcome! Have a great weekend!
Tina
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May you also have a great weekend!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
In just these few words you allowed your reader to feel the emotion along with a vision of the sorrow.
Maybe saying I "enjoyed" reading this work maybe the wrong wording maybe "feeling" this is more appropriate.
Good job
Mtv
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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In just these few words you allowed your reader to feel the emotion along with a vision of the sorrow.
Maybe saying I "enjoyed" reading this work maybe the wrong wording maybe "feeling" this is more appropriate.
Good job
Mtv
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Thank you ever so much. I truly appreciate the comments and rating.