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Comment from Cindy Decker
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Rhonnie,
I really like your poem for two reasons: I am a Democrat, and I am voting for Joe,
And three--Trump is sort of a jerk. And four, it's a really good poem.

I hope we get good leadership back in the White House in January.
Excellent photo depicting Trump as a bull.
Great poem.
Good luck in all you do.
Cindy

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2020

Comment from Alex Kashko
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Good poem for children and in the style of electoral poetry anywhere.

I would like to see a bit more work on the metre to turn it into an ear worm, something all political persuasions would not be able to forget.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
    HELLO ALEX: I thank you for your review. You are appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69. P.S. There will be more. R.J.
Comment from roof35
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I like this one. I am hopeful your poem rings true and we lose the bully. This is well illustrated and well written. It is just simply well done. Nice job.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2020
    HELLO ROOF35: I thank you for your encouraging review. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69. P.S. We have already lost the bull. He and his kind just don't see or know it yet. R.J.