Peace
Breathe it in...19 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Etheree to find peace within your heart and soul that will bring calmness despite the chaos abd threats surrounding us in our daily lives.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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A very well-written Etheree to find peace within your heart and soul that will bring calmness despite the chaos abd threats surrounding us in our daily lives.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Your review is much appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from Boogienights
I like this very much because a little peace is what we could all use right now. The world is so screwed up right now, it's making me sad. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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I like this very much because a little peace is what we could all use right now. The world is so screwed up right now, it's making me sad. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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You're so right, B. Your review is so much appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A finely tuned Etheree and I felt the peace covering me here in your healing power, I think we all need to heal ourselves and be kind to our body and soul, and I always reserve time to contemplate and meditate, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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A finely tuned Etheree and I felt the peace covering me here in your healing power, I think we all need to heal ourselves and be kind to our body and soul, and I always reserve time to contemplate and meditate, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Your review is much appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a well written Etheree in 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables speaks about living life at peace; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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This is a well written Etheree in 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables speaks about living life at peace; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Your review is much appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from LisaMay
Apart from the fact that i don't personally like "eschew" as a word, your presentation is very appealing. Hopefully, those "discordant walls" can be hushed into peace by our attitude to embrace healing.
(I know you did it to achieve the outer edge smooth shape of the lines, but I found the gaps between some of the words somewhat distracting to smooth reading.)
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Apart from the fact that i don't personally like "eschew" as a word, your presentation is very appealing. Hopefully, those "discordant walls" can be hushed into peace by our attitude to embrace healing.
(I know you did it to achieve the outer edge smooth shape of the lines, but I found the gaps between some of the words somewhat distracting to smooth reading.)
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Your review and critique are much appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from equestrik
This is truly beautiful and exudes peace and healing. The picture is stunning and goes really well with your poem. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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This is truly beautiful and exudes peace and healing. The picture is stunning and goes really well with your poem. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Your review is much appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from Tina Crute
Just wow...this is amazing. Sometimes when the art is so beautiful, the words don't equal it, but your words do. Your poem almost reads like a how-to find peace poem, as your words instruct the girl to take a breath and be still. Just reading it slowly makes me kind of peaceful:)
I wish you luck. This is amazing, but I have no sixes!
Tina
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Just wow...this is amazing. Sometimes when the art is so beautiful, the words don't equal it, but your words do. Your poem almost reads like a how-to find peace poem, as your words instruct the girl to take a breath and be still. Just reading it slowly makes me kind of peaceful:)
I wish you luck. This is amazing, but I have no sixes!
Tina
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Your review is so very much appreciated, Tina. Thank you.
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You are welcome:)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Peace is ethereal and calming, that inexplicable bliss borderline happiness. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest ð???
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Peace is ethereal and calming, that inexplicable bliss borderline happiness. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest ð???
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Your review is much appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did an excellent job with your contest entry, Mystery Writer. I like the color scheme, the formatting of lines, the image, the color scheme, and the great rhymes. However, it is your message that is a standout.
One is in control of how they choose to react to life.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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You did an excellent job with your contest entry, Mystery Writer. I like the color scheme, the formatting of lines, the image, the color scheme, and the great rhymes. However, it is your message that is a standout.
One is in control of how they choose to react to life.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
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Your review is much appreciated. Thank you.
