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Peace

Breathe it in...

19 total reviews 
Comment from Dawn Munro
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How did I miss this jewel of perfection? Oh dear, there just aren't enough hours in a day! Congratulations on a most deserved win, IMHO. I can't imagine any Etheree more beautiful!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
    Thanx so much, Dawn - looking forward to finding some semblance of a 'normal routine' so that I can do more than the 'short contests'! ;) Take care up there and have a great Thursday! ;) Yvette
reply by Dawn Munro on 10-Sep-2020
    Always a pleasure, my friend.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hi Yvette.

Congratulations on the contest win. Your description of peace as it "quietly" surrounds her. Peace is more precious, and rarer, than gold these days.

Da Z

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
    Hey, Z -- thanx so much for this one, my friend... up until now, I've really only found the time to keep my pen wet on the shorties... but I'm determined to make time for more soon!! ;) :) I need a bit of 'mundane' if that's even possible - ugh!! ;) Take care, you! ;) Yvette
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 09-Sep-2020
    You're welcome. Hang in there
    Yvette. A little mundane could come in handy. 😁
Comment from Chelle_GH
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A real winner indeed! Peacefully represented - the image matches the poem... there's this feeling of peacefulness when I viewed the image while reading each lines. Perfectly written!

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
    Thanx so much for stopping in for the review on this one, Chelle -- and my apologies for running late on my replies. :) Be sure to drop by again sometime - would be glad to have you! ;) :) Take care of you out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)

Comment from Bill Schott
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This etheree, Peace, has the proper one to ten syllable formatting and gives a bit of instruction on how to present oneself when meeting with peace.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
    Wow, Bill, thank you!! Take care of you out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, my friend,

nice entry for the Etheree writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. I enjoyed reading your etheree about peace....I like the form. Pretty presentation. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
    Thank you, Gypsy, for your comments here.
Comment from Patty Palmer
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Great poem. We could all stop an take a breather about now. Just trying to chill! Take a breath and let the peaches behind cover you over. Well said!
Patty

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much!!
reply by Patty Palmer on 04-Sep-2020
    You're welcome!
    Patty
Comment from Colin John
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Hi , lovely presentation and a refreshing contest entry if I ever saw one, and it reverses perfectly and gives the same message. many thanks for sharing and good luck and especially for taking up this challenge. Cheers Colin

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
    Thank you very much!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is a beautiful, soothing poem. You have an appealing blend of literal an figurative language. I must say I find it nothing short of amazing that some people can achieve peace by relaxing and taking a breath. I have to pray for peace.

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
    Many thanks, Janice, for stopping by for the review.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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I could understand your subject in the words you chose for the entry for Ethreee writing prompt. I wish you great good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
    Thanks so much!
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 03-Sep-2020
    You're welcome.
Comment from Laurie Holding
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This is just beautiful, and I've never played in the Etheree form before, but your Peace makes me want to try it out! Thank you for sharing, and I LOVE your accompanying art. Good luck in the contest! You've got my vote!

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
    Thank you so very much!!