God knew better
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Comment from Loren .
Loved this! Families come hidden in many disguises. It is only until a veil is lifted that one can see the true meaning of family and how it binds those in a world created by love, Loren
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Loved this! Families come hidden in many disguises. It is only until a veil is lifted that one can see the true meaning of family and how it binds those in a world created by love, Loren
Comment Written 10-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, Mr. Loren
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, God knows everything about us, and even knows the partner in life would have been made for us when God measured our life in steps, beautifully written my friend, a very good post, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : In 2011 we had (t)our first baby.
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Oh yes indeed, God knows everything about us, and even knows the partner in life would have been made for us when God measured our life in steps, beautifully written my friend, a very good post, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : In 2011 we had (t)our first baby.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2020
Comment from Patty Palmer
A beautiful love story! It has to be fate, written with the Lord's own hand for everything good to happen. What would be the chances of talking with someone who lives in Canada and is also Romanian? Beautiful! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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A beautiful love story! It has to be fate, written with the Lord's own hand for everything good to happen. What would be the chances of talking with someone who lives in Canada and is also Romanian? Beautiful! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review:)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a perfect entry for the Sentimental Reflections writing prompt. It is interesting and informative. I do hope it does well in the contest. Best of luck to you!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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This is a perfect entry for the Sentimental Reflections writing prompt. It is interesting and informative. I do hope it does well in the contest. Best of luck to you!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review:)
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You're welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing this amazing story of how God brought you two together from a video chat to the need for Synthoid! But I'm curious about " I saw him, I just wanted to drop the money and run." Why? Was he so good-looking or scary?
I hated that place with to many people (too)
In 2011 we had tour first baby girl (our not tour?)
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Thanks for sharing this amazing story of how God brought you two together from a video chat to the need for Synthoid! But I'm curious about " I saw him, I just wanted to drop the money and run." Why? Was he so good-looking or scary?
I hated that place with to many people (too)
In 2011 we had tour first baby girl (our not tour?)
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like the humor in this story and how you and your husband meant for each other in the end. It is a nice love story.
I found a couple of typos:
"with to many" - "with too many"
"tour first baby girl" - "our first baby girl"
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I like the humor in this story and how you and your husband meant for each other in the end. It is a nice love story.
I found a couple of typos:
"with to many" - "with too many"
"tour first baby girl" - "our first baby girl"
Comment Written 06-Sep-2020
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very interesting story. How amazing that you met a fellow Romanian while pretending ;your were from Kansas. I think God or one of his special angels has fun arranging such unlikely matches. Great story for the contest.
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This is a very interesting story. How amazing that you met a fellow Romanian while pretending ;your were from Kansas. I think God or one of his special angels has fun arranging such unlikely matches. Great story for the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
Comment from RShipp
I enjoyed the 'honest innocence' I felt as I read this.
The 'kitties' ,,, what a family!
Best of luck in the Sentimental Reflections writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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I enjoyed the 'honest innocence' I felt as I read this.
The 'kitties' ,,, what a family!
Best of luck in the Sentimental Reflections writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for the good wishes and for taking a chance on this piece of family history.
Comment from equestrik
This is a cute and clever story and also fun that it is true. I know that the language barrier creates some of the grammar issues but it creates a break in the smoothness of the story. Nicely done. Lucky cats. :)
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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This is a cute and clever story and also fun that it is true. I know that the language barrier creates some of the grammar issues but it creates a break in the smoothness of the story. Nicely done. Lucky cats. :)
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much for joining me in this crazy adventure called sentimental life:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Of course God knew before you or your now husband did. This is a great loving that you shared, Mystery Writer. I loved reading it. You included many details and allowed readers to know of this special time.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
May I suggest ~
I created an account under Snow White from Kansas.
( 'Snow White from Kansas' ) At that time(,) I was still in Romania, and marriage was not on my To Do List.
One day, this guy started to talk with me, and we were having so much fun talking that we decided to see each other again, virtually(,) of course. I told him about my free trial and also that my account will
( would) expire in a few days.
We talked for one year, and then I got mad and
break ( broke ) up with him.
I was thinking that he is too old for me, (no comma) and moved on.
I was tired of going to the Internet Cafe every weekend,(no comma-- add-- and being glued) glued to a computer for several hours. I hated that place (with) to many people smoking inside and no privacy.
I was running out of my Thyroid 9thyroid) medication that he was smuggling in the country from North America.
Synthroid is used only in USA and Canada. I was panicking and started searching for someone( who) that was living over there.
I contacted him,( no comma) and asked for help. He told me that he can't get it without a prescription. I didn't believe him, but now I know you can't get 9 medications)thing without prescription.(prescriptions)
I told him to let me know when ( he was) is back in Romania so I can return the money. He came later that year (for a visit). We never meet(met) in person, so when he arrived and (I) saw him(,) I just wanted to drop the money and run.
Somehow he started to talk, and I just forgot about how (delete how) his looks and let myself be touched by his soul. I guess, God knew better!
In 2009(l,) I moved to Canada. In 2011(,) we had together(delete together) our first baby girl - a beautiful cat. And(delete And --Then one . . .) then one month later we got the boys, two tabby kitties that helped us a little (to overcome the burden of our loss.)) beat with burden of our loss.
We are not perfect, but God knew that we were meant to be together with beautiful kitties.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Of course God knew before you or your now husband did. This is a great loving that you shared, Mystery Writer. I loved reading it. You included many details and allowed readers to know of this special time.
Thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
May I suggest ~
I created an account under Snow White from Kansas.
( 'Snow White from Kansas' ) At that time(,) I was still in Romania, and marriage was not on my To Do List.
One day, this guy started to talk with me, and we were having so much fun talking that we decided to see each other again, virtually(,) of course. I told him about my free trial and also that my account will
( would) expire in a few days.
We talked for one year, and then I got mad and
break ( broke ) up with him.
I was thinking that he is too old for me, (no comma) and moved on.
I was tired of going to the Internet Cafe every weekend,(no comma-- add-- and being glued) glued to a computer for several hours. I hated that place (with) to many people smoking inside and no privacy.
I was running out of my Thyroid 9thyroid) medication that he was smuggling in the country from North America.
Synthroid is used only in USA and Canada. I was panicking and started searching for someone( who) that was living over there.
I contacted him,( no comma) and asked for help. He told me that he can't get it without a prescription. I didn't believe him, but now I know you can't get 9 medications)thing without prescription.(prescriptions)
I told him to let me know when ( he was) is back in Romania so I can return the money. He came later that year (for a visit). We never meet(met) in person, so when he arrived and (I) saw him(,) I just wanted to drop the money and run.
Somehow he started to talk, and I just forgot about how (delete how) his looks and let myself be touched by his soul. I guess, God knew better!
In 2009(l,) I moved to Canada. In 2011(,) we had together(delete together) our first baby girl - a beautiful cat. And(delete And --Then one . . .) then one month later we got the boys, two tabby kitties that helped us a little (to overcome the burden of our loss.)) beat with burden of our loss.
We are not perfect, but God knew that we were meant to be together with beautiful kitties.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much Jan, for your corrections and for reading my piece of family history:)