Comment from tempeste

Excellent

�Ciao poet, I voted for your poem .. You have 8 votes now!

Your entry appealed to me cause I'm a sci- fic nerd

..hence I believe that we are not alone ..

There are other sentient life forms beyond the stars .. I have no doubt about that.

For me the question is rather :

what will their intent be ???

Will they be peaceful or will they want to destroy us.

I fear the latter.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello anonymous

Beautiful entry for the Trinet writing prompt contest. Good word count and connection between lines that flow nicely. Gorgeous presentation. Great topic about space travel. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020

Thanks for your comments. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Trinet about the mystery we may find what lies beyond the stars we see at night. There may be worlds and galaxies waiting to be explored and discovered.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

This poem is a great entry for the Trinet Poem writing prompt. There is truth in a few words. Best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There is so much to discover in our galaxy and I would love to fast forward 1,000 years and see what we have learned by then, a thought provoking write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020

Thanks for your review. It does make you wonder.

Comment from Kathleen S.

Excellent

Love the picture. The poetry goes well with it. I really like the imagery you've drawn here. I agree with what it says too. Not sure how one could explore other worlds, but perhaps that is something for someone else's future.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020

Thanks a lot for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

A most interesting form, author and I guess the shape is intended to look like a cross?

I very much like the direction you have taken your poem as it speaks to hope, understanding and cooperation among humans to reach for the stars.

Wishing you much luck in the voting booth. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020

Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

A very well crafted poem for the contest. You took what seemed like small lines and wrote about vastness of space. That contrast was an excellent idea.

Well done.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

It's exciting to think what lies beyond in all that space we have such limited knowledge about. Your poem shares that excitement of future discovery, finding out about the other lives and worlds.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes a haunting air of mystique emanates from this Trinet - yes I guess we can't be the only inhabitants - wonder how we might react to other 'people'- nice pic to illustrate

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 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020

Thanks for your review. You also have to wonder how we would react to them.