This Present Road
A monorhyme for current times...32 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is a fantastic poem, written in a style I find most difficult. Your subject matter is timely in light of what is going on in the world today. Good luck to you in the contest.
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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This is a fantastic poem, written in a style I find most difficult. Your subject matter is timely in light of what is going on in the world today. Good luck to you in the contest.
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much, Boogienights!
Comment from Gloria ....
Author I think you did a fine job with a challenging monorhyme. All the end rhymes worked in nicely and your strong social commentary led to a hopeful conclusion.
Best of luck to you in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Author I think you did a fine job with a challenging monorhyme. All the end rhymes worked in nicely and your strong social commentary led to a hopeful conclusion.
Best of luck to you in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!
