This Present Road
A monorhyme for current times...32 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
I found these words clear, strong, descriptive and interesting. The poem
flows and connects well. The color scheme and presentation are
awesome! I pondered on these words and present times. The artwork
goes well with this poem. Have a wonderful weekend!....Maria
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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I found these words clear, strong, descriptive and interesting. The poem
flows and connects well. The color scheme and presentation are
awesome! I pondered on these words and present times. The artwork
goes well with this poem. Have a wonderful weekend!....Maria
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review and support, Maria -- and my apologies for running late on my replies. :) Take care of you out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Ben Colder
Interesting concept. The stanzas are strong with good wording. I was thinking how we need all the teachers in our nation to stand and rebuke the colleges who allow Anti- American professors to tare down what we the parents have taught our children
Thank you.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Interesting concept. The stanzas are strong with good wording. I was thinking how we need all the teachers in our nation to stand and rebuke the colleges who allow Anti- American professors to tare down what we the parents have taught our children
Thank you.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Amen, Brother Ben - AMEN!! ;) :) Thanx so much for your review and support, sir -- and my apologies for running late on my replies. :) Take care of you out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This monorhyme, This Present Road, has the common rhyming end words and seems to see from aloft the struggles, with both humans and nature in this furious days of 2020.
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This monorhyme, This Present Road, has the common rhyming end words and seems to see from aloft the struggles, with both humans and nature in this furious days of 2020.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review and support, Bill -- and my apologies for running late on my replies. :) Take care of you out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Raul1
I can learn a lot from you about poetry. You're a very good poet. Excellent work! I like the use of the words it flows and has clarity. No grammatical errors. Good luck on the contest! I'm sure this is a winner.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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I can learn a lot from you about poetry. You're a very good poet. Excellent work! I like the use of the words it flows and has clarity. No grammatical errors. Good luck on the contest! I'm sure this is a winner.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Raul-- and my apologies for running late on my replies. :) Take care of you out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from A. Fortier
Mrs. Roger,
This is an excellent poet. Personally it felt very patriotic...that may just be your photo though! This poem was really well-written. Congrats on a great piece.
Cheers,
A.Fortier
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Mrs. Roger,
This is an excellent poet. Personally it felt very patriotic...that may just be your photo though! This poem was really well-written. Congrats on a great piece.
Cheers,
A.Fortier
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, A -- and my apologies for running late on my replies. :) Be sure to stop in again some time, my lady -- and 'Yvette' will do, my mom was Mrs. Roger. :) ;) ;) Take care of you out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Eternal Muse
What a creative Monorhyme! Coupled with your fantastic artistic presentation and photo; your imagery and visuals - this makes a fantastic read, my friend. Good luck in the booths - it will made a strong contender.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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What a creative Monorhyme! Coupled with your fantastic artistic presentation and photo; your imagery and visuals - this makes a fantastic read, my friend. Good luck in the booths - it will made a strong contender.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review and support, J -- and my apologies for running late on my replies. :) Take care of you out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Yevette.
I like the meter you used in this poem. It moves quickly and the rhyme is very well done. This must have been a blind entry contest. I didn't see it before.
Good luck in the contest.
DA Z
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Hi Yevette.
I like the meter you used in this poem. It moves quickly and the rhyme is very well done. This must have been a blind entry contest. I didn't see it before.
Good luck in the contest.
DA Z
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review and support, Z -- and my apologies for running late on my replies. :) Take care of you out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)
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You're welcome. Don't worry bout nuttin. Pace yourself. 😂😂😂
Comment from Janice Canerdy
"The eagle cries again" is a superb, symbolic expression for how events in society challenge what we SAY we are. We don't always act like the home of the brave and the free! Your poem has moved me.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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"The eagle cries again" is a superb, symbolic expression for how events in society challenge what we SAY we are. We don't always act like the home of the brave and the free! Your poem has moved me.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review and support, Janice -- and my apologies for running late on my replies. :) Take care of you out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from royowen
I've struggled with the word "freedom" some use it like confetti, and about as useful to its meaning. Like the crop of present day protestors or looters, firebugs, destroyers of property, I think for them anarchy is a better word. Beautifully beautifully and skilfully written dear Yvette, in wonderfully rhymed triplets, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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I've struggled with the word "freedom" some use it like confetti, and about as useful to its meaning. Like the crop of present day protestors or looters, firebugs, destroyers of property, I think for them anarchy is a better word. Beautifully beautifully and skilfully written dear Yvette, in wonderfully rhymed triplets, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review and support, Roy -- and my apologies for running late on my replies. :) Take care of you out there and have a wonderful remainder of the week!! ;) Yvette :)
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Thats fine Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
This Present Road
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the Monorhyme writing prompt contest. It's a great monorhyme for our current state of affairs. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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This Present Road
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the Monorhyme writing prompt contest. It's a great monorhyme for our current state of affairs. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Your review is appreciated. Thank you. 8-)
