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My Undying Devotion!

Praising God for The Gift of Her!

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Comment from Patty Palmer
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She must be one very special girl that even God approves of. It gives me goosebumps thinking how the Lord told you to write this poem and how you gave it to her on your fifteen month anniversary. Well done!
Patty

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Tina Crute
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This is so sweet, personal and real. The colors and picture make a pretty presentation, but it is your words that paint the prettiest picture, two lives sold out to God. I love the message and enjoyed reading this.
Tina

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from IndefinitelySmallx
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Good poem! While I am certainly no religious person, poetry has made me feel something that you have and experience it as well. That is the purpose of poetry and it always works and that is enough for me.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
reply by IndefinitelySmallx on 22-Oct-2020
    aight den
Comment from Vanna1
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Really heart warming poem. So nice you dedicated this to your special lady. I like the theme and presentation. The caps in some places didn't seem necessary and the flow was bumpy at times but still an enjoyable poem.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Sally Law
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I am so happy for you, dear Fonda. You are a blessing to us all here on FanStory and a light for Jesus Christ! I pray for the loving path for you both.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs......

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Raul1
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest! It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Boogienights
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I would love to have someone write a poem like that to me. It speaks of a love so deep and heaven sent, that nothing can shake you apart. A great contest entry, best of luck.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from royowen
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A lovely poem my friend, I've been with my wife since 1971. But it's nice when you meet the love of your life, and the years stretch endlessly before one. So congratulations, in all things give praise to God, there are now two generations from my loins. Well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your contest entry is in good form. Your lines read well with good flow, good rhymes, and great imagery. As I read, I could visualize everything you mentioned. The image is a great pairing with your well-chosen words that praise our God for his undying love.
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from roof35
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This is a lovely tribute to your girlfriend. Congratulations on finding your way in life and being thankful. This poem is poignant and well written. Nicely done.

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 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!