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My Undying Devotion!

Praising God for The Gift of Her!

61 total reviews 
Comment from robyn corum
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Fonda,

Wow. Okay - do you think you would consider teaching classes on romantic writing? My hubby sure could use a dose - I'll sign him up as your first student. *smile*

I don't know one person on earth who wouldn't love a poem like this written about them. Thank you!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
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Beautiful poem .How special to write a poem for your love and knowing by the grace of God you found each other. Thru Christ all things are possible .God Bless

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
reply by Carmen Ducharme on 18-Oct-2020
    Thank you so so much for the beautiful blessing I will treasure that .God Bless you and your family
Comment from flylikeaneagle
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Fonda ***************** fifteen stars for you. Congratulations on being sober, knowing Jesus, and finding her. Together you will see miracles
and give your testimonies to touch hearts. Your poem is Heaven sent.
************************ God's blessings. flylikeaneagle ***********

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
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Dear author,

Beautiful work!!! Awesome job!! My favorite part is,

She is far beyond,
what I expected!

This dazzling Godly Woman,
for me,
that The Lord has selected!

Just like all that The Lord,
in my life,
has set in motion,
The Gift of Her,
makes me more prone,
to give Him,
my undying devotion! ...
Thanks for sharing!!!

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Rubypond
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Beautifully done! I really enjoyed the spiritual side of this that somehow seem to slip from the descriptions in today's definition of what love is. Thank you for this beautiful piece of work and for reminding us what it really is to love!

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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What a powerful love poem. You spoke from the high above from the blessing of the God. It is very spiritual and your bond is unbreakable. You two are blessed and strong under any circumstances.
Well done.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Dan Dinkel
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Very well written - really captures your love for her, and for the Lord! Just wondering how you're going to top that on your 2 year anniversary! May God continue to bless your precious relationship, and your writing!

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Fonda, this is an interesting love poem where God has played a great deal in your good fortune to meet the woman of your dreams. Very well written in free form. Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Eternal Muse
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This is a very happy spiritual poem praising God for giving you the gift of your girlfriend. You used some wonderful descriptive imagery and visuals; I enjoyed your rhymes and flow. I am sure this is going to do very well in the contest; good luck in the booths.

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Aussie
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We only have to surrender our will and He will do the rest. You have your sobriety and your love. All Time Best congratulations. The only comment (with respect) I would break up the lines as it gets a bit thick towards the end. How about quatrains? Four lines then a break so we don't get lost in your fervor?

 Comment Written 04-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!