Comment from poetwatch

Excellent

This is very lovely, LisaMay. Jeeny seems to have a wonderful life traveling the world, seeing what they have to offer, and finding her future from New Zealand. Are you still married? Mike sounds like a great guy. :) Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020

Thanks for your review. No, unfortunately I'm not still married. He was a great guy for 8 years then it broke up through infidelity.

Comment from zanya

Exceptional

What a wonderful tale of young love and romance and happy ever after - it's an absolute joy to read full of the joys of living and loving -thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020

I'm so pleased you enjoyed my story. It brought back lovely memories as i was writing it.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Congrats on your happy marriage and the beautiful story that backs it up. Your love grows with each city visited, with each country and at the end on a different continent all together. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020

Thanks for reviewing. I wrote this story from happy memories... It was a beautiful story for us to begin with... if only the loving feelings had lasted. We were married for 8 years.

reply by Iza Deleanu on 04-Sep-2020

yup I know what you are talking about

Comment from writer723

Exceptional

I really found the story of how you met your husband fascinating. I enjoyed all the cultural references you included. Your descriptions helped me to feel that I was there, seeing and experiencing the places you mentioned. I've never been out of the U.S. So, hearing about your camping tour was a real treat for me. It sounds like the two of you lived out a beautiful love story amidst breath-taking scenery. A couple of scenes were a bit humorous as well. Great job!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020

I apologise for my late reply. I appreciate your review very much! Thanks for your comments. You mention an aspect of my writing that appealed to you, for the same reasons that i enjoy other writers' work - because we get a glimpse into other places and cultures. That is a major benefit of belonging to this international writers' community.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I thoroughly enjoyed this romantic tale. I especially like your itinerary format, tellIng us what happened when and where. We get just enough of his backstory to see why you were attracted to him. And the tale had a happy ending! Rod

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

I find this biographical non-fiction has a stable romantic story of sentimental reflections; nice plot development, resolved ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is quite a story. You really had an international romance. What great memories you made together while you were in the process of falling in love. I enjoyed your interesting story.
Beth

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

Funny how we find love when we're not looking for it.Thank you for sharing your story with us. Good luck in the contest. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

Comment from TommyWrites

Excellent

This is a wonderful story of you and your husband falling in love!
It's very touching, with a sense of adventure that makes it all the better. Your writing makes it easy to follow along with, and enjoyable. I was hoping there would be more! ;)
I think this is a beautiful contest entry. I've never been in love, perhaps I will someday, but if I do, I hope it's something as special as what you have.
Good luck,
TommyWrites~

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020