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Just For Kicks

Surprise 80 Words Story Contest

4 total reviews 
Comment from LisaMay
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Thanks for the insight to alien humour and how they get their kicks. First, they entertain themselves by designing silly human anatomy, now they visit us to abduct, scare, humiliate, and disorientate. The fields they dump us in probably have crop circle mazes just to keep us on our toes.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
    Lol. I actually thought about finding a pic of a crop circle for this. Thank you for the excellent review, Lisa. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great night.

    =]

    Congrats on the second place tie. Catch you next go around.

    Ron
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt.
This short piece has a surprising twist. Funny.
I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the great review, Sharon. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, this is funny and I loved those happy aliens laughing at the naked man running for his life, you entertained me here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Dolly. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.
Comment from humpwhistle
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Well, that's the kind of surprise that brings on heart attacks. Sure, it's all fun and games . . . 'til someone flat-lines. Least they can do is let the poor bastard keep his pajamas! No wonders aliens get such bad ink.

Well done. Best of luck at the polls. Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
    Lol. That's the truth. At least leave them some undies or something. Thank you for the hilarious review, Lee. I really appreciate the stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness. If interested, I goofed around with the pic to make it funnier and changed a couple words here and there. Thanks again, Lee.