Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I like your lines about sin, it is so true, humans seem to be so caught up in it. I also like the line about video games, some people cannot seem to stop playing them. Excellent poem and your words have meaning.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020

Thanks Elaine for your time and review.
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Comment from John bailey

Excellent

Very nice Doctor Ricky, I like how we play with sin and then try to hide it.Sin is always standing at the door,you don't have to open it can slide right in. your play on words is right on,its always in our mind we cannot exsape it, eveready to move left or right,its telling us to take it. Thanks Doctor Rick.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020

It's throughout history it's been proven.
Samson had his Delilah look what it did to him!
JFK had his Marilyn Monroe and look what it did to both of them?
Midas had his gold Cinderella had her slipper... Romeo Juliet..
But then again there's instances where there is no sin such as Mickey and Minnie...
Popeye and Olive oil...
Ozzie and Harriet my favorite is Elizabeth Taylor and Richard Burton!
But the ultimate thing goes back to the beginning with course Adam and Eve!
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If you would have just taken a piece of Adam's soul or even a piece of his heart we wouldn't have so many divorces today and wouldn't be so many problems between men and women.
When you think about a rib?
That Eve was supposedly created from?
And, we can go into the local supermarket.
And, if we're hungry?
Shop for one?
Thanks,
Ricky

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Good wishes; complete the book at your earliest, Over the Horizon at the End of the Rainbow; there is nothing to review this piece of information or news. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020

You can go back to it now it's completed!
Doctor Ricky 1024