Winter Treats
Activities to be enjoyed in winter.11 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
It's not until I read a descriptive experiential poem such as yours, that it occurs to me that many do not have the double-edged honor to have these experiences. It's getting colder fast in Vermont at night. So I've been already diving into my hot chocolate supply. It's one of the best parts of winter. You have nicely captured everything.
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It's not until I read a descriptive experiential poem such as yours, that it occurs to me that many do not have the double-edged honor to have these experiences. It's getting colder fast in Vermont at night. So I've been already diving into my hot chocolate supply. It's one of the best parts of winter. You have nicely captured everything.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the
Seasons acrostic writing prompt contest. Good words and connection between lines that improve the flow. Nice Winter imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Hello, anonymous,
A fine entry for the
Seasons acrostic writing prompt contest. Good words and connection between lines that improve the flow. Nice Winter imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Seasons acrostic contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Seasons acrostic contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from RShipp
'Instead of flowers, frost icicles will bloom.' This is my favorite line!
It is amazing that each 'season; has its traditional activities the bring individual amusements to be enjoyed.
Well done.
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'Instead of flowers, frost icicles will bloom.' This is my favorite line!
It is amazing that each 'season; has its traditional activities the bring individual amusements to be enjoyed.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from A. Fortier
Anonymous Poster!
Thank you for your poem. "Peejay attire" has to be my favorite phrase. I really like your description and how the poem flows through an entire winter day.
Sincerely,
A.Fortier
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Anonymous Poster!
Thank you for your poem. "Peejay attire" has to be my favorite phrase. I really like your description and how the poem flows through an entire winter day.
Sincerely,
A.Fortier
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Nice work in the acrostic form--doesn't sound forced like many do--fresh and clever imagery: wheezing wind--alliteration!--frost icicles blooming. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
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Nice work in the acrostic form--doesn't sound forced like many do--fresh and clever imagery: wheezing wind--alliteration!--frost icicles blooming. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I just love this stanza, it represents the beauty of winter:"Wind wheezes chill breath as it tries to entomb;
Instead of flowers, frost icicles will bloom.
Nature is resting, wrapped up in warm coats,
Topped off with hats, and scarves around throats.
Enjoying some sport in fresh air if we dare,
Rosy cheeks flushing, we skate 'round the rink,
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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I just love this stanza, it represents the beauty of winter:"Wind wheezes chill breath as it tries to entomb;
Instead of flowers, frost icicles will bloom.
Nature is resting, wrapped up in warm coats,
Topped off with hats, and scarves around throats.
Enjoying some sport in fresh air if we dare,
Rosy cheeks flushing, we skate 'round the rink,
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Acrostic poem about the winter treats we enjoy despite the cold temperatures the white snow is akways the best surprise in the morning. The wonderful hot drinks and treats to stay warm at the fire place.
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A very well-written Acrostic poem about the winter treats we enjoy despite the cold temperatures the white snow is akways the best surprise in the morning. The wonderful hot drinks and treats to stay warm at the fire place.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Mystery Writer. I love the color scheme--very wintry. The image is supportive, too. Your words flow smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery. I could see this as I read it. I like the way you used a different color for the first letter of each line.
May I suggest:
peejay--->pj
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Writer. I love the color scheme--very wintry. The image is supportive, too. Your words flow smoothly with good rhymes and great imagery. I could see this as I read it. I like the way you used a different color for the first letter of each line.
May I suggest:
peejay--->pj
Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We make the most of the winter season and your poem is positive here and putting those warm slippers on and getting cosy with a hot toddy is welcoming, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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We make the most of the winter season and your poem is positive here and putting those warm slippers on and getting cosy with a hot toddy is welcoming, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
