Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

Your poem will draw the reader in to possibly wonder what beauty you describes really looks like. bit we who are gifted with this every year, know it is not just how it looks but it involves all of the senses. Well written.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, anonymous,

A fine entry for the
Seasons acrostic writing prompt contest. Good words and connection between lines that improve the flow. Nice Autumn imagery.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020

Thank you for the positive review.

Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Seasons acrostic contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020

Thanks very much for your review

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 01-Sep-2020

You're very welcome!

Comment from RShipp

Excellent

'Translucent leaf colours of yellow and red' and 'Vibrant and beautiful, strikingly bold' are my favorite lines in your acrostic.

Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Paul Borders

Excellent

I choose this one !! This poem seems to be the best one out of all the entries in my opinion. The other entries aren't as good as yours. I hope you win.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Wow, what a beautiful poem I think you have a wonderful poem here. I like this stanza:"A rainbow arrangement of red, orange and gold

Vibrant and beautiful, strikingly bold

Earth is covered in carpet of leaves

Scattered about, under the eaves
:" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest,

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Acrostic about the Autumn leaves in their vibrant colors from yellow to red scattered underneath the trees forming a carpet where small animals can hide.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

I like this write as we move toward the Autumn season. Good illustration to go with your writing. I think it is a clever write and a good one for the contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020

Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your acrostic poem pays an enthusiastic tribute to fall and nature. Your details are colorful and specific in describing the changes engendered by the season.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020

Thanks very much for your review

Comment from roof35

Excellent

This is an excellent entry in the acrostic contest. It is perfectly written with no errors. I especially like the line, "Nature at work on God's earthly bed." Nicely done.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020

Thanks very much for your review. That's my favourite line as well.