Pappa's Memories and Ramblings
Viewing comments for Chapter 96 "Flawed Future "Poems, Rants, Short Stories and Ramblings
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Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Well that's the truth. This is not protesting, this is rioting and looting, and it is criminal. I really think there are people behind all of this, wish we could find out who. Take Portland, how are these people surviving? How do they eat, where do they sleep? something is very scary about the entire scenes of today.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Well that's the truth. This is not protesting, this is rioting and looting, and it is criminal. I really think there are people behind all of this, wish we could find out who. Take Portland, how are these people surviving? How do they eat, where do they sleep? something is very scary about the entire scenes of today.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the Time to Read, Rate, and Review this poem offering. There has been reports linked to right wing and left wing extremist along with some Presidential mumblings and urging too, mean while Putin and Others smile.
Comment from IndefinitelySmallx
A poignant reflection of today's climate. Succinct and reflective. Beautiful. My only suggestion would to be to replace the final exclamation point with a a simple period (or omit punctuation altogether).
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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A poignant reflection of today's climate. Succinct and reflective. Beautiful. My only suggestion would to be to replace the final exclamation point with a a simple period (or omit punctuation altogether).
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the Review, Time to Read and Rate this poem offering as Well as the Suggestions. It's a little dramatic flare I suppose.