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The Leader We Don't Need

We have a personal duty to vote for a better America.

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This reminds me of my book I am reading a quote from it.
I'm reading The Hopi Survival Kit by Thomas E. Mails. It is about prophesies made in AD 1100.
He writes The (deceptor) ever so slyly twists the truth just enough to keep the poorly informed from discovering what he is doing until they have followed him too far and bcome lost.

It will be interesting how readers react to your poem. It needs to be said. I am voting for this one.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2020
    Your "deceptor," in my opinion, is much cleverer than Trump, who does not even attempt to be sly, he just out right lies. Thanks for your read and comments.
reply by Liz O'Neill on 02-Sep-2020
    Good point.
Comment from emmaysavage
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i see this mmuch more an essay than a poemI love your response to this prompt. You catalog your reasoning effectively, and the ending is good to make your point(s) very clear. However

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
    Thanks for your read and comments.
Comment from LisaMay
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It doesn't seem to matter how many times good people repeat that Trump is a damaging president, there will still be those you ignore his repeated abuses of ethics, honesty, and good governance.
I totally agree with your point of view... you have listed the reasons why he does not deserve a 2nd term. I don't live in US but I sure hope the American people will not repeat the same mistake.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
    I sure hope you are correct. I am ashamed of his leadership and what he has done to our friends in the world. Thanks for your read and your comments.