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"The Gift of Life."

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True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world

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Comment from equestrik
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This is a profoundly brave and sad write as well as heart breaking. I am so sorry that your son is gone . I cannot imagine that though, I have had both my father and my beloved younger sister pass. The grief changes but doesn't ever leave.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
    I come up with some once in awhile like this that I really enjoyed posting.
    as in the most all my work I siphon it from above it's just a gift.
    Thanks again.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Ben B.
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What was with all those numbers at the beginning? I just zoomed right by it as I imagine most people did. I suppose you could put that in the middle but please don't use something like that in the opening.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
    You must be making reference to the two A's at fan story adds every time I post next to this c copyright symbol which messes up the line so that the whole thing doesn't stay on one line the way it was meant to.
    Otherwise I don't know what you're talking about the only numbers there are today's date when it was written and my writing number