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Timidity is not an option...9 total reviews
Comment from RShipp
'Watermarked by hand of grace...' What a perfect line!
You selected a nice picture to begin the thoughts on your poem.
Best of luck in the ABC writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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'Watermarked by hand of grace...' What a perfect line!
You selected a nice picture to begin the thoughts on your poem.
Best of luck in the ABC writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your great review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ABC poem. In the darkness the smallest light is visible and when it grows into a Kaleidoscope of color and light it is the most beautiful sight we can see.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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A very well-written ABC poem. In the darkness the smallest light is visible and when it grows into a Kaleidoscope of color and light it is the most beautiful sight we can see.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review, Sandra!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun and vibrant write about the embracing light and the colourful world we live in with its diversity, especially in nature, I must say those colours certainly impact on the eye, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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A fun and vibrant write about the embracing light and the colourful world we live in with its diversity, especially in nature, I must say those colours certainly impact on the eye, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is an orderly composed poem tells about timidity; I find the flow of thoughts is free, with some good word imagery; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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This is an orderly composed poem tells about timidity; I find the flow of thoughts is free, with some good word imagery; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from equestrik
WOW, what a beautiful kaleidoscope of butterflies, it is stunning. Your words go with it well. Super job with this and I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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WOW, what a beautiful kaleidoscope of butterflies, it is stunning. Your words go with it well. Super job with this and I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Andrelyn Izquierdo
What a joy to read. Your creativity shined throughout this poem from beginning to end. My favorite line is the one that begins with "Unbowed". It made me think of fearlessness with good intentions. Your poem resembled the gracefulness of the butterfly and highlighted it's unique features and strengths.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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What a joy to read. Your creativity shined throughout this poem from beginning to end. My favorite line is the one that begins with "Unbowed". It made me think of fearlessness with good intentions. Your poem resembled the gracefulness of the butterfly and highlighted it's unique features and strengths.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much, Andrelyn, for such a wonderfully encouraging review and those bright stars! :) I would love to have you stop by when the contest is complete, my lady, and may you have a wonderful week ahead! :)
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You?re very welcome, good sir.
Comment from Lucy de Welles
All elements here. This is the third mention of Kaleidoscopes that I have read today. Must be a theme going on. Indeed, the art work and the last line tie this concept of changing scenes together in this piece. The viceroy by faith, hope, grace, can surely create a scene that is delightful, and never stop until he is satisfied with his picture. Darkness to light. The kaleidoscope must be turned to the light before a picture, design, can form.
Very nice!
Lucy
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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All elements here. This is the third mention of Kaleidoscopes that I have read today. Must be a theme going on. Indeed, the art work and the last line tie this concept of changing scenes together in this piece. The viceroy by faith, hope, grace, can surely create a scene that is delightful, and never stop until he is satisfied with his picture. Darkness to light. The kaleidoscope must be turned to the light before a picture, design, can form.
Very nice!
Lucy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Stunning imagery--elegant and startling--masterful wordplay re dual meanings--of viceroy and kaleidoscope--thanks for footnote! Fine work, even apart from the added challenge of the form--impressive choice of uncommon letter sequence. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Stunning imagery--elegant and startling--masterful wordplay re dual meanings--of viceroy and kaleidoscope--thanks for footnote! Fine work, even apart from the added challenge of the form--impressive choice of uncommon letter sequence. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Mary Furlong
What beautiful images in both the poem and the illustration you've selected. My favorite line is "Viceroys with wings of faith." What a lot of meaning lies in that line. Thanks for sharing this, and thank you for the information about the Viceroy butterfly.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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What beautiful images in both the poem and the illustration you've selected. My favorite line is "Viceroys with wings of faith." What a lot of meaning lies in that line. Thanks for sharing this, and thank you for the information about the Viceroy butterfly.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your review.
