Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.

Excellent

This is a heart wrenching story from beginning to end. So many children fall prey to the evils of society. There is so little that can be done to rescue them.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020

Thank you so much for reading my chapter. Over 300,000 children each year. That's just the ones they know about. I'm hoping this story will raise awareness so more people will see the signs, speak up, save a child's life A trafficked child usually only lives 7-10 years after dying from addiction, suicide, or disease. So their life is practically over when a pimp gets them in his sights.
Thank you again for reading my chapter all your help, support, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.

reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 30-Aug-2020

I pray you accomplish our goal!

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

You have done an excellent job creating a tense and unforgettable chapter, Misty. It is very well written and left me yearning to take care of the little girl myself. An engrossing and engaging read!

Melissa

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020

Thank you so much for reading my chapter. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm hoping Anna will be the voice for the 300,000 children caught in trafficking rings. Of course, you know me, I have to have a vigilante that'll set things right, take the law into her own hands.
Thank you again for reading my chapter, your friendship. It always means so much to me, take care.

Comment from RShipp

Excellent

'Heavy rain clouds cover the glow of the full moon's light casting a gray haze across the starless skies. The smell of spring flowers wafts through the cool gentle breeze. Night creatures' cries echoes around me warning me of the dangers lurking nearby' This is a great play on the opposites- gray haze- smell of flowers wafting-cries of night creatures.... Well done on the setting of the stage for your story.

You had a very fast paced plot involving the 'trying to hide' and 'capture' of the girl. Well done.

Enjoyed.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020

Thank you so much for reading my chapter, your encouraging words, and your continued support. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm hoping this story will raise awareness. Make people see child trafficking the way it really is not the pictures the media feeds us.
Thank you again for all your support and friendship. It means the world to me, take care.

Comment from BethShelby

Exceptional

I'm glad to see you starting another story. You are such a good and graphic writer. You certainly know how to create chilling stories. This one may be the horrible yet. I don't know much about what has happened in this part of the world and hope parents don't actually give their children up to evil men.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020

Thank you so much for such a terrific review and such encouraging words. Children in foreign countries often do whatever is necessary to support their families. Being stateless they're often stuck in the sex-trafficking, prostitution industry.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Misty this is a great beginning to your new book, heartbreaking as it is. It's a cruel world out there, and this little girl is living it right now. What on earth is to become of her? Very well written and I'm looking forward to the next part. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020

Thank you so much for such a fantastic review. I'm honored. It is a very cruel world. Of course, the pimps know how to play on their vulnerabilities, showing them love, respect, offer pricy gifts. They often find children already victims of sexual, mental abuse. I'm hoping my character will open some eyes, make people see what's going on in their own back yard. That traffickers are often people with authority, leaders of the world.
Thank you again for such a fantastic review, your encouraging words, help, support, and friendship. It always means so much to me, take care.

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This write is so terribly heart wrenching. This child and so many others are being abducted, or perhaps sold? I know that these things do indeed happen and it speaks to the worst in humanity.

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020

Thank you so much for such an insightful review. You're right, this is the worst side of humanity. It's estimated that over 300,000 children are trafficked each year. I'm hoping Anna will give them a voice. Break the media's misleading perceptions so more people will see the signs and speak up. Save a child's life.
Thank you again for reading my chapter. It's always greatly appreciated, take care.

Comment from Jacob David Collins

Excellent

This is a heart-wrenching piece. I really felt for your character as she tried to escape and then when she thought back to what her mother and father did. From the beginning you had me wondering who it was she was escaping from and what had happened prior to this moment. This is a really well written piece and the description worked really will to bring your writing to life. I could picture the scene happening in my mind. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

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 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020

Thank you so much for such an encouraging review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it, could picture it in your mind. You'll find out more about her, how, why this came to be soon. As well as all the struggles she's has to face.
Thank you again for your marvelous review. It means so much to me, take care.