Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Sweet Tooth"My book of poems and stories
15 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
That sounds like my husband - he loves pastries. You met the 1-6-1 criteria well with all the end rhymes of Sweets-treats-eats. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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That sounds like my husband - he loves pastries. You met the 1-6-1 criteria well with all the end rhymes of Sweets-treats-eats. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Sweets are good in moderation. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Sweet Tooth, has the proper formatting and leaves the reader longing for a bit of pastry or a sugary confection. Getting cavities just reading.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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This 1-6-1, Sweet Tooth, has the proper formatting and leaves the reader longing for a bit of pastry or a sugary confection. Getting cavities just reading.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Sweets are good in moderation. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
A great entry for the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows nicely.
I am addicted to sugar. I can understand this poem. LoL
Good job, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
A great entry for the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. It flows nicely.
I am addicted to sugar. I can understand this poem. LoL
Good job, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Sweets are good in moderation. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Those sweets do come in all sorts of naughty treats just tempting us to eat and enjoy first and do our regretting tomorrow. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Those sweets do come in all sorts of naughty treats just tempting us to eat and enjoy first and do our regretting tomorrow. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Sweets are good in moderation. Thanks for reviewing.
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I love sweets!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made my mouth water here with your sweet words and I rarely eat cake, but now I want a piece! Ha ha ha, a delicious write, a treat in words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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You made my mouth water here with your sweet words and I rarely eat cake, but now I want a piece! Ha ha ha, a delicious write, a treat in words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2020
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Thanks so much for your review Dolly. I really appreciate it. Take care.
Comment from RShipp
Oh my... Makes me hungry looking at it and them reading your 1-6-1 poem.
Well done for having such few words! Dead on point.
Best of luck in the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Oh my... Makes me hungry looking at it and them reading your 1-6-1 poem.
Well done for having such few words! Dead on point.
Best of luck in the 1-6-1 contest writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I had to tear myself away from the picture to read the poem! LOL! You have made excellent use of your eight syllables to describe Heaven on Earth. Thank the Lord, I'm not diabetic.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I had to tear myself away from the picture to read the poem! LOL! You have made excellent use of your eight syllables to describe Heaven on Earth. Thank the Lord, I'm not diabetic.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I cannot even pass the bakery at Walmart without sniffing twice. Thanks for reviewing this one. I had no trouble connecting a picture to this post...lol
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about having sweet treats to eat is not very good but I find myself lately craving for something sweet in this time of isolation even more.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about having sweet treats to eat is not very good but I find myself lately craving for something sweet in this time of isolation even more.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I cannot even pass the bakery at Walmart without sniffing twice. Thanks for reviewing this one. I had no trouble connecting a picture to this post...lol
Comment from Lucy de Welles
All elements here.
Bright, delicious, mouth watering photo of not-to-be-passed-by "rewards".
Text simple, clear, clean, understood by all and appreciated.
Well done! Strong contest entry.
Lucy
Did you want to put a question mark after the description? Who can pass up a bakery shop window (?).
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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All elements here.
Bright, delicious, mouth watering photo of not-to-be-passed-by "rewards".
Text simple, clear, clean, understood by all and appreciated.
Well done! Strong contest entry.
Lucy
Did you want to put a question mark after the description? Who can pass up a bakery shop window (?).
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I cannot even pass the bakery at Walmart without sniffing twice. Thanks for reviewing this one. I had no trouble connecting a picture to this post...lol
Comment from RodG
Reading this poem NOW sharpens my sweet tooth for everything I see in that picture. Good thing I'm no where near a bakery. Good luck in the contest. Rod
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Reading this poem NOW sharpens my sweet tooth for everything I see in that picture. Good thing I'm no where near a bakery. Good luck in the contest. Rod
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I cannot even pass the bakery at Walmart without sniffing twice. Thanks for reviewing this one. I had no trouble connecting a picture to this post...lol
