Personal Duty
Before making decisions one must search for truth.4 total reviews
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello,
I pray you are well. You met the poem's requirement. I love your poem about searching for truth before making decisions in our lives. Your eight lines is a very powerful message of about seeking the truth. Yes, we should always search for truth. We should always seek the truth. Well done. Happy future writing.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Hello,
I pray you are well. You met the poem's requirement. I love your poem about searching for truth before making decisions in our lives. Your eight lines is a very powerful message of about seeking the truth. Yes, we should always search for truth. We should always seek the truth. Well done. Happy future writing.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. Much appreciated.
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You are welcome.
Comment from poetwatch
Author, I like your poem so I must write and tell you that on your fourth line you have six syllables. Correct that slight error and the truth shall be heard. So act and do not be a watcher, for those that only see do not succeed. :)
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Author, I like your poem so I must write and tell you that on your fourth line you have six syllables. Correct that slight error and the truth shall be heard. So act and do not be a watcher, for those that only see do not succeed. :)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your read and review. I checked with the syllable counter website at https://www.howmanysyllables.com/syllable_counter/. According to them "factual" has three syllables -- fac-tu-al.
Comment from roof35
Looks like you followed all the rules and penned an excellent entry for the Joseph's Star Contest. This was not an easy format but I see no errors. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Looks like you followed all the rules and penned an excellent entry for the Joseph's Star Contest. This was not an easy format but I see no errors. Nicely done.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. Much appreciated.
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
I read the rules on this contest, and found them very difficult. The fact that each line must mean something, WOW, you did a magnificent job of that, I liked it very much. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I read the rules on this contest, and found them very difficult. The fact that each line must mean something, WOW, you did a magnificent job of that, I liked it very much. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. Much appreciated.
