Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Loss Takes A Toll"My book of poems and stories
27 total reviews
Comment from trimple
Good afternoon, Annie
Your poignant poem I'm sure will strike a chord with many of those who have lost a loved one, myself included.
Much expressed in few words.
kind regards
trimple
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Good afternoon, Annie
Your poignant poem I'm sure will strike a chord with many of those who have lost a loved one, myself included.
Much expressed in few words.
kind regards
trimple
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
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Thank you very much for reviewing. Your kind words are appreciated.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Loss Takes A Toll" is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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"Loss Takes A Toll" is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review and concern. It is much appreciated.
AnnieDawn,
you're more than welcome and certainly
deserve both.
God bless, take care and keep safe!
the Duchess
Comment from patcelaw
Any loss of a person whom we are related to as family or friends does take its toll on our soul. Have a blessed week.
Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Any loss of a person whom we are related to as family or friends does take its toll on our soul. Have a blessed week.
Patricia
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review and concern. It is much appreciated.
Comment from Justin Chopin
Well stated Annie. Thought the line about loss " Bruising the soul" was very profound . Very impressed by how you were able to take these deep thoughts and articulate them so well in this piece.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Well stated Annie. Thought the line about loss " Bruising the soul" was very profound . Very impressed by how you were able to take these deep thoughts and articulate them so well in this piece.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review and concern. It is much appreciated.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Tina Crute
I am sorry that anyone has to experience this. Your little poem expresses the deep pain as a bruised soul in only 3 lines. Good job!. Very effective word choice there!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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I am sorry that anyone has to experience this. Your little poem expresses the deep pain as a bruised soul in only 3 lines. Good job!. Very effective word choice there!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review and concern. It is much appreciated.
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You are so welcome for both. I am only a message away if you need me to pray or chat or whatever.
hugs, new friend!
Tina
Comment from Colin John
Hi, this is a sad and thought provoking poem and one that my mother experienced with my sister Majorie who died of menigitus at a young age in the 60s when it was at its height. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Kind regards Colin
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Hi, this is a sad and thought provoking poem and one that my mother experienced with my sister Majorie who died of menigitus at a young age in the 60s when it was at its height. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Kind regards Colin
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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This review is very much appreciated. I know this has hit home with many as it happens far too many times to far too many children. So many lives cut short is a real tragedy.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your image choice, poignant words, and author notes all work together to create a memorable poem of loss and how it affects each person. Your few syllables, as required, crate great imagery--probably many will identify with this--even if all do so differently.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Your image choice, poignant words, and author notes all work together to create a memorable poem of loss and how it affects each person. Your few syllables, as required, crate great imagery--probably many will identify with this--even if all do so differently.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from eliz100
I like this poem. I am not perfect at syllable count, I count 8 syllables in line 2. The poem and the picture give the sense of loss. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I like this poem. I am not perfect at syllable count, I count 8 syllables in line 2. The poem and the picture give the sense of loss. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you. You are the only one who caught that error which I have corrected. That is why we review and so many just glean over. I appreciate your honesty. Thank you again.
Comment from nomi338
No matter how you spin it, death is an enemy of man who loves life. Remember, even though Jesus knew that he was going to restore Lazarus' life. He still mourned the death of his dear friend. Probably because he knew that Lazarus was going to die again and would go the grave for a much longer time. I believe that the day is coming when most of the people who have died will be resurrected. I still miss and mourn all who have died. Death has robbed us of their presence for now, and we too face the prospect of our own death.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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No matter how you spin it, death is an enemy of man who loves life. Remember, even though Jesus knew that he was going to restore Lazarus' life. He still mourned the death of his dear friend. Probably because he knew that Lazarus was going to die again and would go the grave for a much longer time. I believe that the day is coming when most of the people who have died will be resurrected. I still miss and mourn all who have died. Death has robbed us of their presence for now, and we too face the prospect of our own death.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from royowen
That sounds awful Annie. It must be worse than losing an arm, because with an arm it's not a living soul, one might get used to it, but a day wouldn't go by when you think of what would that child be doing today. My sister lost a small boy who died in her arms in America of all places (we're Australian) Well done Annie, good luc, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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That sounds awful Annie. It must be worse than losing an arm, because with an arm it's not a living soul, one might get used to it, but a day wouldn't go by when you think of what would that child be doing today. My sister lost a small boy who died in her arms in America of all places (we're Australian) Well done Annie, good luc, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much.
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A pleasure
