A Matter of Taste
Poetry - my method, my definition.20 total reviews
Comment from The Death
Hi Debs,
You managed to capture this fact so beautifully. You did serve the poet on a plate. :P Ha! These four lines do define what goes in our minds as we write. What might resonate with one, may not with the other. Excellent rhyming and consistent meter. Hope you win this prompt. Good luck! :)
Regards,
Anupam
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
Hi Debs,
You managed to capture this fact so beautifully. You did serve the poet on a plate. :P Ha! These four lines do define what goes in our minds as we write. What might resonate with one, may not with the other. Excellent rhyming and consistent meter. Hope you win this prompt. Good luck! :)
Regards,
Anupam
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Hi Anupam :)
Thanks for your great feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
I didn't place in the contest - I was quite high up the leaderboard and then it all went wrong for me in the booth overnight! Never mind!
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Debra!
Wise words, my friend! I especially appreciate your last line: "predisposition's out of my control." I can truly relate to that line!
And I also appreciate the notion of poetry feeding one's soul.
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
Hello Debra!
Wise words, my friend! I especially appreciate your last line: "predisposition's out of my control." I can truly relate to that line!
And I also appreciate the notion of poetry feeding one's soul.
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Diane :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from palmart
Very nice Poetry! I feel it as a very precise description on what conveys to be a poet! Not only good ingredients but also tasty seasoning in the wording! Painting was also a great selection to complement the superb writing! Thanks for enjoying us with this nice "poetry supper"!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
Very nice Poetry! I feel it as a very precise description on what conveys to be a poet! Not only good ingredients but also tasty seasoning in the wording! Painting was also a great selection to complement the superb writing! Thanks for enjoying us with this nice "poetry supper"!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
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My Pleasure!
Thank you very much for sharing your poems!! Nice to be part of your public!
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like how this piece speaks the truth about a writer, a poet. We put it out there for the reader to make sense of. What we intend is not always what is taken away from it.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
I like how this piece speaks the truth about a writer, a poet. We put it out there for the reader to make sense of. What we intend is not always what is taken away from it.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much, Mia, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Manh C Dang
I find your poem on poetry writing the most accurate and sincere. The last verse is spot on. Sometimes the poems that I poured my heart into were not well received and others (that I thought were mediocre) were. Good job and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
I find your poem on poetry writing the most accurate and sincere. The last verse is spot on. Sometimes the poems that I poured my heart into were not well received and others (that I thought were mediocre) were. Good job and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and generous star rating. I appreciate it, as well as your good luck wishes for the contest!
Sending you my best, Debra :)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a clever metaphor. Yum. It should draw the reader in to want do as Eve Merriam says in her poem How to Eat a Poem. Your poem is as playful as hers. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
This is a clever metaphor. Yum. It should draw the reader in to want do as Eve Merriam says in her poem How to Eat a Poem. Your poem is as playful as hers. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Liz, for your feedback. I appreciate it.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Interesting poem about food and writing metaphor. You followed the rules of the contest well. It's a fine entry for the Find a creative definition for poet writing prompt contest. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
Hello my friend
Interesting poem about food and writing metaphor. You followed the rules of the contest well. It's a fine entry for the Find a creative definition for poet writing prompt contest. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both!
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Bill Schott
A creative definition for a poem, A Matter of Taste, framed as an AABB rhymed quatrain, allows that the poet writes what he/she feels and then lets the reader apply it to their situation. There will be different reactions from all over.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
A creative definition for a poem, A Matter of Taste, framed as an AABB rhymed quatrain, allows that the poet writes what he/she feels and then lets the reader apply it to their situation. There will be different reactions from all over.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your feedback, Bill, I appreciate it.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
What a perfect entry for the Find a creative definition for poet writing prompt. I do hope this entry does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
What a perfect entry for the Find a creative definition for poet writing prompt. I do hope this entry does well in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and for your good luck wishes. I appreciate both :) Best wishes, Debra
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You're welcome.
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
Hahaha You are absolutely right. We can spend all the time we want on the preparation, the 'spices' we add, and which recipe we use. Then we can toss in a lovely tablecloth, flowers in a vase, and candlelight -- but if our 'guest' is allergic to thyme, hates carnations, or can't see in dim lighting -- or is just finicky is some other way - we're doomed, regardless.
This is a fun metaphor for creating poetry; so vivid and so TRUE! I really enjoyed it. The addition of the rhymes, though not called for, make my heart happy. hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
Debra,
Hahaha You are absolutely right. We can spend all the time we want on the preparation, the 'spices' we add, and which recipe we use. Then we can toss in a lovely tablecloth, flowers in a vase, and candlelight -- but if our 'guest' is allergic to thyme, hates carnations, or can't see in dim lighting -- or is just finicky is some other way - we're doomed, regardless.
This is a fun metaphor for creating poetry; so vivid and so TRUE! I really enjoyed it. The addition of the rhymes, though not called for, make my heart happy. hahaha
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Hi Robyn :)
Thanks for your great feedback and good luck wishes! I appreciate both...
Best wishes, Debra :)