Oasis of the Open Heart
What is a poet? What is a poem? Imagining from the heart.28 total reviews
Comment from Michele Harber
Lisa May, your use of vocabulary is excellent and, as always, you astound with your astute alliterative assertions. This is a wonderful use of the prompt, and I wish you luck in the contest.
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Lisa May, your use of vocabulary is excellent and, as always, you astound with your astute alliterative assertions. This is a wonderful use of the prompt, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello to you Lisamay .
Your question what is a poet? and What is a poem Yes you so right it the images you see from comes the from tones heart
Oasis of the Open Heart Smiles I like your title.
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Hello to you Lisamay .
Your question what is a poet? and What is a poem Yes you so right it the images you see from comes the from tones heart
Oasis of the Open Heart Smiles I like your title.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the way you used alitteration in this piece. It gives a look to the life of a poet and how we see the world and how we use our words.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I like the way you used alitteration in this piece. It gives a look to the life of a poet and how we see the world and how we use our words.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your comments - it's always useful to know what appeals to readers.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I immediately love this because of your luscious alliteration. I hope the reader enjoys this as much as I did. I love reading it aloud. I had to reread it for joy. And I just realized it is an acrostic. I have to give this A+.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I immediately love this because of your luscious alliteration. I hope the reader enjoys this as much as I did. I love reading it aloud. I had to reread it for joy. And I just realized it is an acrostic. I have to give this A+.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your complimentary review! Your response to it gave me much pleasure.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Interesting poem about an oasis and writing metaphor. You followed the rules of the contest well. It's a fine entry for the Find a creative definition for poet writing prompt contest. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Hello my friend
Interesting poem about an oasis and writing metaphor. You followed the rules of the contest well. It's a fine entry for the Find a creative definition for poet writing prompt contest. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thanks for your review!
Comment from Bill Schott
A creative definition for a poem, Oasis of the Heart, framed as an acrostic poem,POET, and further confined to line by line alliteration, give s truly creative example of the form.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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A creative definition for a poem, Oasis of the Heart, framed as an acrostic poem,POET, and further confined to line by line alliteration, give s truly creative example of the form.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thanks Bill.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
What a perfect entry for the Find a creative definition for poet writing prompt. I do hope this entry does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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What a perfect entry for the Find a creative definition for poet writing prompt. I do hope this entry does well in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I'm pleased you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for your good wishes.
Comment from Mary Furlong
I just love everything about this total presentation- the form of the poem, the ideas expressed, the alliteration, the accompanying art work. The echo line is my favorite. Good luck with this beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I just love everything about this total presentation- the form of the poem, the ideas expressed, the alliteration, the accompanying art work. The echo line is my favorite. Good luck with this beautiful poem.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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You've made my day with this uplifting review! Thank you so much for your comments, Mary. Also, thanks for becoming a fan... the message wouldn't let me respond so i'll thank you here.
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Lisa
This is a nice acrostic entry for the creative definition of a poet. It should do well in the contest.
I like "a poem pictures a possibility" because a poet's words paint a picture. You could say a poet is a painter. But he/she uses words instead of paint.
I like the repetition of "echo... echo... echo"
I'm not sure about "tears" though. I'd prefer "Trail of tricks, to touch, tantalize, and transform; tender or tart"
I wish you good luck in the contest!
Hugs,
Kimbob
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Hi Lisa
This is a nice acrostic entry for the creative definition of a poet. It should do well in the contest.
I like "a poem pictures a possibility" because a poet's words paint a picture. You could say a poet is a painter. But he/she uses words instead of paint.
I like the repetition of "echo... echo... echo"
I'm not sure about "tears" though. I'd prefer "Trail of tricks, to touch, tantalize, and transform; tender or tart"
I wish you good luck in the contest!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
Comment from emmaysavage
I usually don't care for acrostic poetry but this one really grabbed me, and I love the alliteration. I also found the art moving and apt. my favorite: oasis of the open heart
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I usually don't care for acrostic poetry but this one really grabbed me, and I love the alliteration. I also found the art moving and apt. my favorite: oasis of the open heart
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
