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Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "Dinu and Leo"
to keep my sanity in time of pandemic

17 total reviews 
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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It sounds like you pamper your kitties. One thing about a cat/kitty they have a litter box, so to clean you can stay inside the house. A dog must go outside if they need to go potty.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2021

Comment from RShipp
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'- Shut up, this is my chance to see some real birds and smell some flowers.' and '- We are bro forever so we meow together, kitty power, non?' (These are cute lines for your kitten conversation.)

I do hope, if you go, that these kittens are well trained for the wild. I have not had much success in the 'retrieving' of the kitten once he begins to explore!

Enjoyed.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

Comment from lyenochka
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Oh, yes, it's fun to watch French TV. I am glad your kitties are so multi-lingual! Hopefully both of them behaved well on the vacation trip! Best wishes in the contest!

One comment:
I want to take my ten months kitties (ten month old)

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much:)
Comment from writer723
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I really enjoyed this cute little story about your cats. I also liked the inclusion of French. I'm not fluent in the language, yet I find it fascinating. Your tale reminded me of my dog, Digger, and how much he loves riding to the park. Great job!

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your kind review:)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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It is poignant how we hope our new pets will be like our old ones and of course they are their unique selves and kind of a disappointment. I want so much that my new cat would be like my old who's at the Rainbow Bridge. I'm glad at one of your kitties likes to ride. Hepefully, your other will come to enjoy it. I am voting for this one.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your kind review and support:)
Comment from MissMerri
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I love kitties. I also had a cat who hated car rides and would howl and cry the whole time. Of course we soon stopped taking him anywhere other than to the vet. Your story is cute and funny and I enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your kind review:)
Comment from Mia Twysted
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I like that the kittens are talking back and forth to each other. It gives a little insight into the animal life. However, I did not connect with this piece. Were the cats talking the whole time?

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Yup:) they do
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello anonymous

Cute flash Fiction for your kitties. You followed the rules of the contest well. It's a fine entry for the 200 Word Story writing prompt contest. It's hard to write short stories, you did a good job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your kind review:)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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What a perfect entry for the 200 Word Story writing prompt. I do hope this entry does well in the contest! Best of luck to you!

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your kind review:)
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 29-Aug-2020
    You're welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This two-hundred-word story, Dinu and Leo, has the proper word count and gives words to the kittens to give their grievances about staying and going respectively. Cute French twist.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your kind review:)