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Dreamers.

Pulls words from mid-air.

7 total reviews 
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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My favorite verse is "then lines, line up to create words" That is pretty well the way it works. We don't necessarily how the lines will line up and what words will end up on the page. Well written.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Boogienights miles to this line
Pulls words from mid-air. I like the title Dreamers.
I know I'm a dreamer; dreaming some day I will be-able to pick words out of the sky.
Gert

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    I've read your poems..you have already done this....beautiful words. You have a lovely spirit. Thanks for reading my poem.
reply by Gert sherwood on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much Boogienights for your thoughts about me having a lovely spirit.
    Gert
Comment from amada
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Beautiful poet about writing a poet. Wonderful lines, all of them very truthful, I encounter them every time...But my favorite thought is this one; "and dreams take flight like paper birds..."

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your kind words and this great review. :)
Comment from LisaMay
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I love the graphic of origami birds, so appropriate to your poem's image of flight in "dreams take flight like paper birds". We need courage as poets ("dare to share"), so others can join us on that flight.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
    That's so true. I get my support and encouragement from the writers on FanStory. You guys have helped me grow as a poet. Thanks so much for reading.
Comment from Mark D. R.
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We aspire to your dream Boogienights! We all want to 'dare to share.' Your paper birds (Artwork) fly into our minds in combo with your simply described words. Very nice overall presentation. Best wishes in the contest voting.

Mark

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot to me.
Comment from RShipp
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I enjoyed your poem- well done- but with the addition of the picture- it became magical!!

Best of luck with the 'Find a creative definition for poet' writing prompt contest.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
    Thank you for your kind words, they mean so much to me. :)
Comment from mermaids
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I like the analogy of poets to the multicolored paper birds. It is a fitting picture of how diverse poets are. Your use of words describes well how poets create poems.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020

reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
    Thank you for this nice review and your wise words.