Matt Wants a Rat
A short rhyming story poem.21 total reviews
Comment from Lobber
You write: - Matt sat and sat and wished for a rat.
He fell asleep just like the cat. Also a good place to sleep would be Matt's Fat lap. One word that's missing is Drat!
- Lobber
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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You write: - Matt sat and sat and wished for a rat.
He fell asleep just like the cat. Also a good place to sleep would be Matt's Fat lap. One word that's missing is Drat!
- Lobber
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Oh goodness. That would have been a good word to use!! Thanks for the review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written phonic challenge story that children will love to listen to and teach them the sound of many things that sound the same but are different in many ways.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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A very well-written phonic challenge story that children will love to listen to and teach them the sound of many things that sound the same but are different in many ways.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much, for reading my first children's work! I appreciate the compliment!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was really fun to read. You chose a good topic and went with it all the way. I must try one of those one day. Being a cat lover, and a rat hater, I can understand Scat not wanting to catch one. At least Matt had his rat in his dreams. Lol. Well done, I enjoyed reading your poem, good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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That was really fun to read. You chose a good topic and went with it all the way. I must try one of those one day. Being a cat lover, and a rat hater, I can understand Scat not wanting to catch one. At least Matt had his rat in his dreams. Lol. Well done, I enjoyed reading your poem, good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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You should definitely try one of these! This was my first time trying one.
Thank you for the review!
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Yours was by far the best and got my vote, and I am going to try one. I hope you win. :))
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Thank you:):)
Comment from Veenbee
This is so cute. I love the rhyming. Great job. I loved how Scat only wanted to nap and not chat. Cute and creative. Keep up the good work. So does Pat get a cat? Veenbee
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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This is so cute. I love the rhyming. Great job. I loved how Scat only wanted to nap and not chat. Cute and creative. Keep up the good work. So does Pat get a cat? Veenbee
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I'm glad you liked it .Im not sure if Pat gets a cat...I may need to do a sequel! Thanks for the review!
Comment from AnnieDawn
I think kids would get a giggle out of this tongue twister. I don't know if I could read it with a straight face to my grandkids. It is fun anyway. Good job on this. It must have taken some time to put together.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I think kids would get a giggle out of this tongue twister. I don't know if I could read it with a straight face to my grandkids. It is fun anyway. Good job on this. It must have taken some time to put together.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for stopping by and reading. It did take some time, but it was extremely fun to write! Thank you, AnnieDawn!
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Thank you so much for stopping by and reading. It did take some time, but it was extremely fun to write! Thank you, AnnieDawn!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well you made me smile here with you cat and rat chit chat, I didn't quite understand what was going on, but your rhyming was good, a fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Well you made me smile here with you cat and rat chit chat, I didn't quite understand what was going on, but your rhyming was good, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I'm sorry you didn't understand. Matt wanted his cat to find him a pet rat, but the cat wanted to sleep instead,lol, as cats do.At least I made you smile!
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I'm sorry you didn't understand. Matt wanted his cat to find him a pet rat, but the cat wanted to sleep instead,lol, as cats do.At least I made you smile!
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She I got that, but why? Ha ha ha x
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He is a strange kid...what can I
say,lol! :)
Comment from Ben B.
This is a great kids story! I have to give you credit, phonics is not as easy as people think. Too bad this wasn't illustrated into a picture book, it would definitely sell.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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This is a great kids story! I have to give you credit, phonics is not as easy as people think. Too bad this wasn't illustrated into a picture book, it would definitely sell.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for the high praise. When I was younger I always wanted to write kids books. That may be something to consider!
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Thank you for the high praise. When I was younger I always wanted to write kids books. That may be something to consider!
Comment from Mimi Linny
An adorably written phonetic challenge! Loved the use of the rhyming words and the great story line. You've created a fun story that would be perfect written as a children's book! Much luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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An adorably written phonetic challenge! Loved the use of the rhyming words and the great story line. You've created a fun story that would be perfect written as a children's book! Much luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. It sure was fun to write! I appreciate the compliments. By any chance are you a teacher? This sounds like something a teacher would say!
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Thank you for the kind words, but no, I'm not a teacher; however, my oldest daughter and granddaughter both teach kindergarten! I've always loved the art of rhyming poetry, especially for young children learning to read and comprehend grammar! Thanks again and have a wonderful day!
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I like kids books that rhyme too. My degree in Elementary Education was mostly used to teach my ,now grown, daughters. You have a great day too!
Comment from equestrik
This is really a fun rhyming poem and would be a lot of fun when children are learning to read and learning phonics. Really fun and, who doesn't like cats and rats? Having animals in a poem is always a good way to draw kids in.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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This is really a fun rhyming poem and would be a lot of fun when children are learning to read and learning phonics. Really fun and, who doesn't like cats and rats? Having animals in a poem is always a good way to draw kids in.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review. Yes, kids are great lovers of stories with animals, you are right!
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I really liked this and the rhyme made it flow really well and it kept me engaged in your writing. I think I'd be on the cat's side, I'd just want to be left alone. A really well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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I really liked this and the rhyme made it flow really well and it kept me engaged in your writing. I think I'd be on the cat's side, I'd just want to be left alone. A really well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your take on it and the nice review. Cats do what they want, don't they?
