Tad with a bag
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Comment from Jacob David Collins
I enjoyed reading this piece and I thought it was very creative. I thought the rhyme worked really well throughout the piece and I thought it flowed well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I enjoyed reading this piece and I thought it was very creative. I thought the rhyme worked really well throughout the piece and I thought it flowed well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from Ben B.
I take it this is supposed to be a way to introduce kids to PTSD. I guess it's good you're teaching them not to make fun of it given how serious it is.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I take it this is supposed to be a way to introduce kids to PTSD. I guess it's good you're teaching them not to make fun of it given how serious it is.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Yes, that was my intention.Thank you for stopping by.
Comment from michele will
I guess what to me is missing is a strong story line. It is intentionally silly - I did read it a couple of times trying to figure it out. Did Tad forget his manners. the challenge was a difficult one and I apologize if I missed something.
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I guess what to me is missing is a strong story line. It is intentionally silly - I did read it a couple of times trying to figure it out. Did Tad forget his manners. the challenge was a difficult one and I apologize if I missed something.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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it's just a silly story trying to cover the writing challenge. Thank you for stopping by and taking a chance on this small piece
Comment from elchupakabra
I'm not sure what to say about this piece, it just didn't really strike me with the humor personally. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this piece. Later daze.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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I'm not sure what to say about this piece, it just didn't really strike me with the humor personally. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this piece. Later daze.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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thank you 😊
Comment from Ric Myworld
LOL. Well, I do believe I've known a few of these characters in my lifetime. I can even see them through you're fine descriptions. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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LOL. Well, I do believe I've known a few of these characters in my lifetime. I can even see them through you're fine descriptions. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed it!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review
Comment from Veenbee
Very cute story. It put you into the mind of Tad, and that it didn't take a lot to please him. He just want some attention. I also liked the picture you chose to go with the story. It was very fitting.
Veenbee
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Very cute story. It put you into the mind of Tad, and that it didn't take a lot to please him. He just want some attention. I also liked the picture you chose to go with the story. It was very fitting.
Veenbee
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020
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Thank you kindly
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Writer. Your image is a good pairing with your lines. Those lines read smoothly. I could hear them in my head as I read. I really like the length of this as it isn't too short nor too long. It was a fun story to read. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Writer. Your image is a good pairing with your lines. Those lines read smoothly. I could hear them in my head as I read. I really like the length of this as it isn't too short nor too long. It was a fun story to read. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from RShipp
Best of luck with the A Phonemes and Phonics Challenge contest. This is one contest that I do not understand at all? I have tried reading the directions and goggling- but ???
What a clever picture to put with your humor poem! It definitely fits the bill.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Best of luck with the A Phonemes and Phonics Challenge contest. This is one contest that I do not understand at all? I have tried reading the directions and goggling- but ???
What a clever picture to put with your humor poem! It definitely fits the bill.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from roof35
You got in plenty of phonemes and wrote a humorous story. Your illustration is cute so it pairs well with your words. This is a difficult format. Nicely done.
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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You got in plenty of phonemes and wrote a humorous story. Your illustration is cute so it pairs well with your words. This is a difficult format. Nicely done.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
