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Tad with a bag

bag-hat-hug

19 total reviews 
Comment from Katherine M. Kean
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I found the words chosen in this piece waere not the closet to each other to be true phonemes. Therefore, the understanding and reasoning of the phenomenon is still a little obscure to me, and I will have to study the question further.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2020

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

Great entry for the
A Phonemes and Phonics Challenge contest. Good Rhyming and Rhythm scheme. Nice presentation. I like the tad with a bag topic. :) Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from Bill Schott
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I am not at all sure what is going on here with the phonemes challenge other than, well, I don't know. Here, at least, Bob was able to get Tad a hat and a hug.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a unique poem that should do well as an entry for the A Phonemes and Phonics Challenge. I do hope this poem does well in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your kind review:)
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 29-Aug-2020
    You're welcome.
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Writer,

This is just plain weird. And the sad part is that it's still one of the only posts I've read in this contest that actually meets the requirements of the contest. hahaha

I do not know what your goal is with this story - but it sure made me put my thinking cap on. Hmmmm...

Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Hi Robyn:) to tell you the true:) I have no clue either, but here we are;) Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written prose for the phonics challenge to make Tad a happy lad all he needs was as bag with a hat and a hug. Bobby becomes Tad's hero for life.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello Friend,
It's a nice piece of Humor Fiction having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture complements the theme.
Good Luck!

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your kind review:)
reply by RPSaxena on 31-Aug-2020
    Iza Deleanu, Most Welcome!
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from lyenochka
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This is a fun story and reads like a reading beginner's book. But it has a deeper meaning of learning to act in compassion with those who may be suffering from some mental trauma. Well done! Best wishes in the contest!

- Would you? Really? BOBBBB, you'll make happy, Tad? (do you need the comma here as Tad is talking so happy is the adjective describing Tad.)

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Wit and whimsy--hug in a bag--this will be fun and educational--I'm confident it will appeal to kids learning to read. (PTSD reference is jarring, confusing, and out of place.) Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from papa55mike
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There are so many special children out there including our special granddaughter, Shynoa. What a wonderfully written little story.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
    Thank you so much for your kind review:)