Tad with a bag
bag-hat-hug19 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I found the words chosen in this piece waere not the closet to each other to be true phonemes. Therefore, the understanding and reasoning of the phenomenon is still a little obscure to me, and I will have to study the question further.
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I found the words chosen in this piece waere not the closet to each other to be true phonemes. Therefore, the understanding and reasoning of the phenomenon is still a little obscure to me, and I will have to study the question further.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the
A Phonemes and Phonics Challenge contest. Good Rhyming and Rhythm scheme. Nice presentation. I like the tad with a bag topic. :) Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the
A Phonemes and Phonics Challenge contest. Good Rhyming and Rhythm scheme. Nice presentation. I like the tad with a bag topic. :) Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from Bill Schott
I am not at all sure what is going on here with the phonemes challenge other than, well, I don't know. Here, at least, Bob was able to get Tad a hat and a hug.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I am not at all sure what is going on here with the phonemes challenge other than, well, I don't know. Here, at least, Bob was able to get Tad a hat and a hug.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a unique poem that should do well as an entry for the A Phonemes and Phonics Challenge. I do hope this poem does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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This is a unique poem that should do well as an entry for the A Phonemes and Phonics Challenge. I do hope this poem does well in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
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You're welcome.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
This is just plain weird. And the sad part is that it's still one of the only posts I've read in this contest that actually meets the requirements of the contest. hahaha
I do not know what your goal is with this story - but it sure made me put my thinking cap on. Hmmmm...
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
This is just plain weird. And the sad part is that it's still one of the only posts I've read in this contest that actually meets the requirements of the contest. hahaha
I do not know what your goal is with this story - but it sure made me put my thinking cap on. Hmmmm...
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Hi Robyn:) to tell you the true:) I have no clue either, but here we are;) Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written prose for the phonics challenge to make Tad a happy lad all he needs was as bag with a hat and a hug. Bobby becomes Tad's hero for life.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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A very well-written prose for the phonics challenge to make Tad a happy lad all he needs was as bag with a hat and a hug. Bobby becomes Tad's hero for life.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
It's a nice piece of Humor Fiction having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture complements the theme.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Hello Friend,
It's a nice piece of Humor Fiction having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture complements the theme.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
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Iza Deleanu, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from lyenochka
This is a fun story and reads like a reading beginner's book. But it has a deeper meaning of learning to act in compassion with those who may be suffering from some mental trauma. Well done! Best wishes in the contest!
- Would you? Really? BOBBBB, you'll make happy, Tad? (do you need the comma here as Tad is talking so happy is the adjective describing Tad.)
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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This is a fun story and reads like a reading beginner's book. But it has a deeper meaning of learning to act in compassion with those who may be suffering from some mental trauma. Well done! Best wishes in the contest!
- Would you? Really? BOBBBB, you'll make happy, Tad? (do you need the comma here as Tad is talking so happy is the adjective describing Tad.)
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wit and whimsy--hug in a bag--this will be fun and educational--I'm confident it will appeal to kids learning to read. (PTSD reference is jarring, confusing, and out of place.) Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Wit and whimsy--hug in a bag--this will be fun and educational--I'm confident it will appeal to kids learning to read. (PTSD reference is jarring, confusing, and out of place.) Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
Comment from papa55mike
There are so many special children out there including our special granddaughter, Shynoa. What a wonderfully written little story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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There are so many special children out there including our special granddaughter, Shynoa. What a wonderfully written little story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 27-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
