Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor

Excellent

Who is this person that you have issues with? Is this a sister, brother, husband, wife? It sounds like you have issues with yourself. I feel for people who have no self worth, because it usually isn't their fault. Sometimes a parent or a spouse, are the producer. People with no confidence love to pick on others. BEWARE.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020

It is just a poem. Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I really enjoyed this, especially using (to me) rare white eggs as your medium of expression. I have always been, and am still left, confused as to the difference between envy and jealousy. I yjink jealousy is stronger and harsher, but maybe you will educate me.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! Much appreciated!

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020

I think that maybe the words envy and jealousy might be similar.

reply by Katherine M. (k-11) on 27-Aug-2020

thank you

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2020

You're welcome.

Comment from Jg

Excellent

Excellent work . Once again I'm able to see in the mind of someone whose jealousy from this poem. It is well done because it captures the theme of jealousy so well. Very expressive , excellent writing .

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

Comment from Ayan3

Excellent

That was an amazing story and I hope you can write more stories and I also could not stop reading it and I hope you get the recognition you need for this story.

Sincerely, Ayan

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2020

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!